I Just Feel Like I Don'T Know

Am trying to hide my pain
But my face tells it all
A love disease i have become
So go on, pour some hot water on me
Am as vulnerable as can be

Am trying to plan my future here
So don't you look above my flat head
Please look beyond my outer face
I have big plans, you see
But i need to get out of this bed
Get my laziness to work and maybe achieve a dream

I feel full, like am full of it
One minute am playing you, the next minute am fooling me
It's complicated
I just need some love
Beyond the sculpture that i've become
Above the joke that i've become
I promise to return the love
I won't just store it somewhere hiden
I will walk outside with it and share it with all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/30/2015 11:38:00 PM
You are no joke my dear, loved this poem, so much expressed here!
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Date: 12/2/2015 5:17:00 AM
Hi Arthur, this writing was based on a sculpture so its actually not my personal feelings. So i can say the sculpture/pic moved me and i moved it too. Lol thank you
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