I Just Can'T Live Without You My Honey-Red's

From the first moment I saw you I fell in love.
I knew that I had to have you, and I would do what ever it took to make you mine.
You were such a beaming beauty and you made the ground shake under my feet.
We spent many of happy times together since that day when I made you mine.
Then came that dreadful night when I returned home from a fishing trip to find you gone.
What I felt all along had suddenly come true; I just couldn’t go on living with out you.
Then I saw the letter and it explained what happened and where you could be found.

I went by the next day hoping to sneak a peek at you, but to no avail.
I could have gone over there just to see you, but that wouldn’t do.
I had to straighten something’s out in my immature, selfish life first.
So, I went back home, and over the course of the next few days, I got rid of my toys.
The motorcycle, the ATV, the pool table, the Xbox 360, and even the Kegerator went.

Now, I was ready to make a new start, and take you back home again.
I knocked up on the door, and Pops let me in.  I said “I’m here for my red beauty.”
When I laid eyes on you it was love at first sight all over again.
I brought you a present and opened it up; placing a drop behind each head rest.
I made you a solemn promise that day “I’ll never let anyone shift your gears again!”
I slapped three grand in Pops hand, and we rolled out like a cool breeze on a hot summer’s night. 
Me and my honey-red Corvette.


My entry in Drake Eszes's contest "I just can't live without you" 3.5.11

Ref;  Pops Repo LLC

 A fictional tale...beginning to end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/8/2011 4:10:00 AM
Ah!!!! my husband could have written this one, Edwin - his was black. Great writing, you had me fooled to the very end. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Edwin. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 9:56:00 AM
boys and their toys, at least you picked the right toy to keep, cute poem, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:24:00 AM
Pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle, Edwin. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:32:00 AM
oh wow Edwin a red Corvette. Must be awesome. Many heartiest congrats for this super win.
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Edwin
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:13:00 AM
Edwin, you really hit me hard with this piece. I, too, have a massive passion for cars. The sacrifice we're willing to make really knows no bounds, eh? I fully know about this experience more than I care to...excellent job sir!
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Date: 4/6/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congrats Edwin on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this wonderfully written entry luv.. enjoy your special honor with luv.. my friend..
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:10:00 AM
Excellent. My car of choice as well. Thank u for the compliment on " My Dismal Reality". At least that's how I took it. First Impression- you have a gifted and insightful mind. I hadn't thought of it as greater awareness. I think u give me more credit than I deserve. Self-loathing is earned in my case. If u wish to talk further: jvmmmalott@yahoo.com It amazes me that the right path can be so clear, yet I chose what leads to ruin. It must be a form of insanity. more likely stupidity
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:15:00 PM
My last boyfriend was more in love with his Mustang than he was with me. Careful, Edwin, you're making me think all men are alike (but I know that's not true). Best wishes in Drake's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/5/2011 7:43:00 AM
LOl , So Good!!! I love your take on this contest, a sure winner...
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Date: 3/5/2011 6:27:00 AM
Edwin u had me going luv on this read.. great premise for the theme of the red car.. I used to own a red LeMans Pontiac sports car and it was super awesome ..when I had to let it go I cried..so can feel your energy luv.. good luck int he contest.. amazing..
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Date: 3/5/2011 3:32:00 AM
Excellent entry for the contest. Men, like myself, always fall in love with that one special beauty.
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