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I Imagined Him As a Child

I imagined him as a child Instead of the mangled brow, a face twisted in anger, I saw the innocence of the child, somewhere inside I thought of the bruises he endured and the pain, that grew within, as he grew and I thought of my pain by his hand A cycle repeated Forgiveness, the only thing to end my pain to quell the anger, to break the cycle, I imagined him as a child

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Date: 12/10/2018 8:16:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats for your podium finish, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/10/2018 8:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Line xxoo
Date: 11/25/2017 11:23:00 AM
Wow - very powerful and beautiful poem. Added to my FAVES. Thank you, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/26/2017 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line!
Date: 10/26/2017 4:32:00 PM
This poem can be interpreted in a different ways.. One, you were a child who was beat and you were reflecting back to your childhood... or through another person's eyes who you hurt... or maybe you are hurting yourself.. deep write..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2017 5:00:00 PM
Yes, I see what you mean, , Thanks for pointing that out !!
Date: 10/26/2017 9:43:00 AM
This is perfect Mike! I can completely identify with your poem, only my experience was with my mother. I learned from her mistakes and broke the cycle. This expresses the beauty of your soul! : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. I appreciate your kind words xxoo
Date: 10/25/2017 10:37:00 PM
A good way to look at things. Doesn’t excuse the action but it can help in understanding.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/26/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Kim, Yes, I totally agree xxoo
Date: 10/25/2017 1:04:00 PM
The lump in my throat says this is a fave. Tender tender pen. xomo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/25/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen xxoo
Date: 10/25/2017 12:09:00 PM
Mike, some things are hard to forgive this sounds like one of them, an emotional write!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/25/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings, Yes it was and it took a long time xxoo

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