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can you imagine yourself a young girl from Nighastan? who is thirteen, and never stepped foot in regular school? toiling day and night, taking care of siblings and housework, her smile reminds of fresh-bloomed rose, no cameras capture. can you imagine yourself a young boy from Labonga, works in a factory for hours and hours since he was eight? he is still respectful and humble, polite and thankful, happy as a lark if sometimes he gets to fly a kite. wish we were supremely gorgeous princes and princesses, wearing sparkling gucci outfits, flying in private jets - (talking how to support the poverty-stricken third world) we watch their lavish weddings, their destination travels, and secretly sigh for extravagant life we don't have! met some of those amazingly courageous boys and girls, who do not complain about their uneventful tough lives, they accept their hardest journey with humble compliance - thank god sincerely for their meager plainest possessions! I imagine - if I had the power to change the world, I would make their world blissful. surrounded by purest joy, I would hold her dainty hand, and pore over fairy tales, I would run without bounds in the open field with the boy. those children would teach me to be grateful with simplest things, and to smile joyful smile which nobody can ever snatch. Poet's Notes: The poem is written on the model of Shakesperean sonnet (14 syllables in each line - exception being there are four Quatrains instead of three). January 23, 2021 For "Can You Imagine" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 1/31/2021 8:28:00 AM
My sentiments exactly! Written with the hand of someone whose heart knows the pleasures and pains of a meager existence. If only those with great monetary wealth would focus their attention on those without. Sigh... lovely my new friend ....Kim
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/31/2021 7:01:00 PM
Dear Kim, so delighted to read your thoughtful comments. Thank you. Really appreciate your reading my poem. Love ~ Mala
Date: 1/29/2021 1:40:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this wonderful poem, I like it a lot _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/31/2021 6:59:00 PM
Dear Constance, Your themes are so great I always try to write for your contests. So delighted that you liked it ..a lot! Feel humbled. Love~ Mala
Date: 1/29/2021 11:17:00 AM
Somehow I missed your wonderful poem, Mala! Congratulations on your win. It amazes me that people with so much are never satisfied yet many people who struggle find great joy in simple things. There is a lesson for all of us in that for all of us! Your great wisdom and depth of compassion shine in this gem. Best wishes and blessings to you dear friend!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/31/2021 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. Your thoughtful and encouraging comments mean a lot, Dear Friend. Love~ Mala
Date: 1/28/2021 1:05:00 AM
Congrats dear Mala on your win with this amazing poem. The joy that simple things give can never be enjoyed by the riches. Hugs ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/28/2021 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Anitha, for your inspiring comment. Really appreciate your kind words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 1/27/2021 1:03:00 PM
Hello Mala, children ned a lot of love. taken care of and enjoy life. Children should be children not working at the young age. Going to school to learn for the future. Love friendship, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/29/2021 10:45:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes it is sad. Children should be having fun in stead. Love Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/28/2021 3:47:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thanks for reading my poem. Yes, it's really sad to see children working hard! Love~ Mala
Date: 1/25/2021 2:24:00 AM
Very heartwarming! I can imagine if you had the power to change the world..it would have been a world of love...Very sublime piece dear Mala..Best wishes! I'm gonna fave this.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/25/2021 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, JCB. Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Your Fave! I am so honoured! Love~ Mala

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