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I Hold On

I hold on... to the fact... that you existed not just in this world but inside my own inside my cursed hopes and manifesting fears in the panic of my heart... and even now, alone I hold on yet still I think I always will February 16, 2018

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Justin Bordner

Date: 2/20/2018 6:57:00 PM

A volatile lovehold can be so strong and painful, yet so warm and lasting Poetess. This poem really captures this odd truth, expresses with a calm introspective beauty your pain, and your joy...J.A.B.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/18/2018 8:12:00 PM

i, too, have had this type of love, beautiful write Laura, can relate so much :)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2018 10:19:00 PM

<3 thank you....im learning to let go and live ~<3Laura