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I Hit Your Car is a poem from my book Melodious Verse.

My version of an oldie but goodie in a sestet with couplet rhyme written in 47 words.

Image by me, silhouette of I Hit Your Car.

I Hit Your Car

I Hit Your Car I hit your car in the parking lot. I was there and you were not. So I write this note as the people watch, and my licence plate they will botch. And now this driver he must go. I don’t want to be here when you show. By Josehf Lloyd Murchison
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rebstock Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Lol, my husband can relate.
Murchison Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:33 AM
Thanks I think every one hit in the parking lot can relate.
Smith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 10:09 PM
hehe
Murchison Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:34 AM
Thanks
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