I Hit Your Car
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I Hit Your Car is a poem from my book Melodious Verse.
My version of an oldie but goodie in a sestet with couplet rhyme written in 47 words.
Image by me, silhouette of I Hit Your Car.
I Hit Your Car
I hit your car in the parking lot.
I was there and you were not.
So I write this note as the people watch,
and my licence plate they will botch.
And now this driver he must go.
I don’t want to be here when you show.
By
Josehf Lloyd Murchison
Copyright © Josehf Murchison | Year Posted 2023
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