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I Hit Your Car is a poem from my book Melodious Verse.

My version of an oldie but goodie in a sestet with couplet rhyme written in 47 words.

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I Hit Your Car I hit your car in the parking lot. I was there and you were not. So I write this note as the people watch, and my licence plate they will botch. And now this driver he must go. I don’t want to be here when you show. By Josehf Lloyd Murchison

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Date: 11/23/2023 10:09:00 PM
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