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I Held Her In My Arms

I held her in my trembling arms for the
   
First time


And 


The unfailing sensation, of embracing 

The cosmos, I felt! 


 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    20 August 2015


POTD

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2015

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David Meade Date: 8/23/2015 9:07:00 PM Marvelous my dear friend -- to hold a precious life is a divine gift. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/24/2015 5:52:00 AM Your visits, a treat my friend, David. Thank you!

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/22/2015 5:14:00 PM Congratulations on this romantic piece being chosen as POTD, my dear poet. Great write. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:36:00 PM Thank you so much, dear Eileen, for your constant visits and kind comments. I appreciate it enormously!

Edlynn Nau Date: 8/22/2015 2:41:00 PM You captured her...You captured us and the Universe. Congrats to you! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:40:00 PM So gracious of you to comment in such a generous manner! Thank you, dear Edlynn!

Jan Allison Date: 8/22/2015 2:05:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats for poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:41:00 PM Your visits and comments is a source of joy, dear Jan. Thank you so much!

Tim Smith Date: 8/22/2015 1:46:00 PM Tremendous piece my friend...so romantic...well deserved POTD Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:39:00 PM My friend, Tim, always present to comment! Thank you from the depths of my heart!

Constance La France Date: 8/22/2015 1:39:00 PM Congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:43:00 PM It is extremely noble of your part to take the time to visit. Thank you very much dear, Broken Wings!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/22/2015 11:36:00 AM Stunningly beautiful! Congratulations on having this gem selected as POTD! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:44:00 PM Connie, my friend, thank you so much for your kind words.

James Inman Date: 8/22/2015 10:22:00 AM Epigram, interesting form choice for such a lovely poem. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 8/22/2015 9:18:00 PM I agree, Demetrios Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:46:00 PM Well, all forms of poetry are equally powerful, if there is love in our hearts, dear James. Thank you!

Eve Roper Date: 8/22/2015 9:35:00 AM Congratulations on Poem of the Day my friend, your inspirational spiritual writes are always so beautiful. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:48:00 PM Dearest Eve, your presence is always a beautiful site! Thank you so much for your kind visits and comments! God bless you!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/22/2015 9:12:00 AM An eternity felt within a single embrace! What a lovely piece. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:49:00 PM I think you agree with me on that, my good friend, Richard. Thank you!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/22/2015 9:12:00 AM I see this is POTD, congratulations. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 6:50:00 PM Thank you my friend, Richard!

Judy Konos Date: 8/22/2015 9:11:00 AM Congratulations on Poem of the Day...BIG 7 Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/24/2015 12:03:00 AM Judy, my dear, I appreciate your lovely visit and comment. Thank you!

Paul Callus Date: 8/22/2015 8:32:00 AM This is truly romantic Demi! deep down you are a Mediterranean man!~ This also reminds me of when I held my first new-born child! ~ Congrats on POTD honour! // paul Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 8:37:00 AM Thank you for your honoring visit, Paul. If Greeks are not Mediterranean who are then my friend?

Kp Nunez Date: 8/22/2015 7:55:00 AM Hello, sire. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as POTD. Thank you too, for the visit earlier. hugs! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 8:04:00 AM Thank you so much for this and your previous vist, dear Kim

Alexis Y. Date: 8/22/2015 5:47:00 AM I stopped by to say congratulations on having this well deserved piece selected as the poem of the day! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 5:56:00 AM Welcome Alexis Y. I didn't know anything! Thank you so much. You so kind!

Laura Hay Date: 8/22/2015 3:45:00 AM Wonderfully done, congrats on POTD, warm regards, Laura. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/22/2015 5:55:00 AM Thank you for being the bearers of good news. I ignored it! Thank you so much. You are lovely!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/21/2015 2:20:00 AM Very lovely....... a perfect expression! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:45:00 AM Thank you Dr. Upma, for taking the time to visit and comment!

Afolabi Muideen Date: 8/20/2015 7:43:00 PM A lovely and beautiful, your descriptive is eloquence...........A.M. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:46:00 AM My friend, A.M. how nice to receive your visit again. Thank you!

Kp Nunez Date: 8/20/2015 10:48:00 AM Wow, I just love it when a man is able to eloquently express what he felt at his most vulnerable moment with his beloved. Fantastic poem, sire. 7 and will save this to my favs! hugs! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:47:00 AM If the feelings are true then the heart knows how to express them, dear Kim. Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/20/2015 10:07:00 AM Sensational write, my dear poet. What a beautiful and romantic piece. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:48:00 AM Nothing is more pleasing to me than expressing my admiration for beauty, dear Eileen. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!

Anu Nayak Date: 8/20/2015 7:27:00 AM Dear Demetrios, romantic and awesome imagery...embracing the cosmos! adorable write..a 7!...love, Anu:-) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:51:00 AM Every lady could be the Cosmos for a man in love! I am certain you have been the Cosmos for someone, dear Anulaxmi if not then something is wrong with men! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a noble way!

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/20/2015 6:45:00 AM Beautiful and romantic write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:51:00 AM Thank you, Ravi, for your precious visit and comment!

Jan Allison Date: 8/20/2015 5:07:00 AM wow what a beautiful romantic poem Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx soupmail xx Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:52:00 AM Only romantic hearts as yours could appreciate my poem and for that I thank you, Dear Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2015 4:57:00 AM - I have to read one poem, before I rushing on .... and it must be your beautiful poem, dear friend Demetrios - I wish you a lovely day :) - (Today the house be be cleaned from top to bottom) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:53:00 AM Anne Lise, my friend, I hope all will be fine soon and you will be back in full swing! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Michael Tor Date: 8/20/2015 2:44:00 AM She must have been real special.. Nice poem made me go back in time to a special moment. I hope we all have them. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2015 5:44:00 AM Welcome my new friend, Michael. Thank you for your kind visit and comment!