Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Epigram

I Held Her In My Arms

I held her in my trembling arms for the
   
First time


And 


The unfailing sensation, of embracing 

The cosmos, I felt! 


 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    20 August 2015


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David Meade August 23, 2015 at 9:07 PM Marvelous my dear friend -- to hold a precious life is a divine gift. Demetrios Trifiatis August 24, 2015 at 5:52 AM Your visits, a treat my friend, David. Thank you!

Eileen Manassian August 22, 2015 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on this romantic piece being chosen as POTD, my dear poet. Great write. Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:36 PM Thank you so much, dear Eileen, for your constant visits and kind comments. I appreciate it enormously!

Edlynn Nau August 22, 2015 at 2:41 PM You captured her...You captured us and the Universe. Congrats to you! Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:40 PM So gracious of you to comment in such a generous manner! Thank you, dear Edlynn!

Jan Allison August 22, 2015 at 2:05 PM Dropping back with my congrats for poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:41 PM Your visits and comments is a source of joy, dear Jan. Thank you so much!

Tim Smith August 22, 2015 at 1:46 PM Tremendous piece my friend...so romantic...well deserved POTD Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:39 PM My friend, Tim, always present to comment! Thank you from the depths of my heart!

Constance La France August 22, 2015 at 1:39 PM Congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:43 PM It is extremely noble of your part to take the time to visit. Thank you very much dear, Broken Wings!

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2015 at 11:36 AM Stunningly beautiful! Congratulations on having this gem selected as POTD! Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:44 PM Connie, my friend, thank you so much for your kind words.

James Inman August 22, 2015 at 10:22 AM Epigram, interesting form choice for such a lovely poem. James Inman August 22, 2015 at 9:18 PM I agree, Demetrios Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:46 PM Well, all forms of poetry are equally powerful, if there is love in our hearts, dear James. Thank you!

Eve Roper August 22, 2015 at 9:35 AM Congratulations on Poem of the Day my friend, your inspirational spiritual writes are always so beautiful. Hugs Eve Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:48 PM Dearest Eve, your presence is always a beautiful site! Thank you so much for your kind visits and comments! God bless you!

Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 9:12 AM I see this is POTD, congratulations. Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thank you my friend, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2015 at 9:12 AM An eternity felt within a single embrace! What a lovely piece. Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 6:49 PM I think you agree with me on that, my good friend, Richard. Thank you!

Judy Konos August 22, 2015 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on Poem of the Day...BIG 7 Demetrios Trifiatis August 24, 2015 at 12:03 AM Judy, my dear, I appreciate your lovely visit and comment. Thank you!

Paul Callus August 22, 2015 at 8:32 AM This is truly romantic Demi! deep down you are a Mediterranean man!~ This also reminds me of when I held my first new-born child! ~ Congrats on POTD honour! // paul Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 8:37 AM Thank you for your honoring visit, Paul. If Greeks are not Mediterranean who are then my friend?

Kp Nunez August 22, 2015 at 7:55 AM Hello, sire. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as POTD. Thank you too, for the visit earlier. hugs! Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 8:04 AM Thank you so much for this and your previous vist, dear Kim

Alexis Y. August 22, 2015 at 5:47 AM I stopped by to say congratulations on having this well deserved piece selected as the poem of the day! Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 5:56 AM Welcome Alexis Y. I didn't know anything! Thank you so much. You so kind!

Laura Hay August 22, 2015 at 3:45 AM Wonderfully done, congrats on POTD, warm regards, Laura. Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 5:55 AM Thank you for being the bearers of good news. I ignored it! Thank you so much. You are lovely!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 21, 2015 at 2:20 AM Very lovely....... a perfect expression! Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:45 AM Thank you Dr. Upma, for taking the time to visit and comment!

Afolabi Muideen August 20, 2015 at 7:43 PM A lovely and beautiful, your descriptive is eloquence...........A.M. Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:46 AM My friend, A.M. how nice to receive your visit again. Thank you!

Kp Nunez August 20, 2015 at 10:48 AM Wow, I just love it when a man is able to eloquently express what he felt at his most vulnerable moment with his beloved. Fantastic poem, sire. 7 and will save this to my favs! hugs! Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:47 AM If the feelings are true then the heart knows how to express them, dear Kim. Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian August 20, 2015 at 10:07 AM Sensational write, my dear poet. What a beautiful and romantic piece. Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:48 AM Nothing is more pleasing to me than expressing my admiration for beauty, dear Eileen. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!

Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 7:27 AM Dear Demetrios, romantic and awesome imagery...embracing the cosmos! adorable write..a 7!...love, Anu:-) Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:51 AM Every lady could be the Cosmos for a man in love! I am certain you have been the Cosmos for someone, dear Anulaxmi if not then something is wrong with men! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a noble way!

Ravi Sathasivam August 20, 2015 at 6:45 AM Beautiful and romantic write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:51 AM Thank you, Ravi, for your precious visit and comment!

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 5:07 AM wow what a beautiful romantic poem Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx soupmail xx Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:52 AM Only romantic hearts as yours could appreciate my poem and for that I thank you, Dear Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2015 at 4:57 AM - I have to read one poem, before I rushing on .... and it must be your beautiful poem, dear friend Demetrios - I wish you a lovely day :) - (Today the house be be cleaned from top to bottom) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:53 AM Anne Lise, my friend, I hope all will be fine soon and you will be back in full swing! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Michael Tor August 20, 2015 at 2:44 AM She must have been real special.. Nice poem made me go back in time to a special moment. I hope we all have them. Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 5:44 AM Welcome my new friend, Michael. Thank you for your kind visit and comment!