I Heard I Might Find a Poet Here - Repost

Note: Reposted for my good friend John Hamilton who remembered I wrote this when I didn’t


I was just sitting there writing when I saw her stroll in,  
I wasn’t alone, all eyes followed those curves sashaying 
as if she owned the place and maybe she did. . . 
if a heart can skip a beat, mine did a somersault.

Obviously cut from a finer cloth
than these eight dollar trousers ever found in their pockets,
the fit much better too, a warm hug on a cold December day
lingering in the moment

She sat down at the crescent shaped bar, 
ordered a martini, neat, pulled a crisp twenty from her clutch
and brushed a few stray brunette hairs from her face,
the mirror behind the bar happily reflecting her beauty

Raising the drink to her ruby red lips
I found myself wishing I were that glass,
smeared in her favorite shade, kissed by a sighing sip,
caressed by porcelain fingers wiping sweat from a glistening neck

A jewel in this dingy joint, shimmering in the dusty haze,
breathing some class into this oblong shadow
that had seen better days, but none like this, like her. 
She was out of place like fine wine in a shot glass . . . but didn’t seem to care

She lifted a cigarette to her mouth, I was quick with a match,
watching as tobacco embers flared and smoke rose upward, swirling about freeform.
Putting her lips together she blew out the flame
with a whisper of breath that made me weak in the knees, “Thank you.”  

I stared, forgetting the spent match I held between my fingers,
tongue tied or mesmerized, take your pick, both answers are correct.
“You’re welcome”, I stuttered like a school boy in braces, “new around here?”
“Kind of”, her voice as chiffon is soft, “I heard I might find a poet here . . . ”

To be continued . . .

There are two more parts to this poem. I will post the remaining tomorrow if any would care to read them. :  )
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Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:54 PM
She was right! Love it, especially this, "She was out of place like fine wine in a shot glass"; beautifully done.
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September 30, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much M.L. I am glad you liked this.
There Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:40 PM
What a sultry piece of writing ~ very seductive scene you've painted here... Nice writing!
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September 30, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Thank you HT. I appreciate your time and nice comments
Chiri Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Haha you know I love these ones you posted before! Wonderful Chris!;)
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September 27, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Thanks so much Brenda. John Hamilton brought this one up the other day and I decided to repost all three. I will post the others later today.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:03 AM
So glad to see this re posted Chris, I await parts 2 and 3:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 27, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thank you Jan. I really am happy you stopped by. I will post them this afternoon sometime.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:15 AM
I await with bated breath Chris. : ) xxoo
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September 27, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Thank you Connie. Just check back a little later, they will be posted
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:31 PM
I think I remember this one, keep them coming Chris :)
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September 27, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi. I will, later today
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Yes please Sir can I have more?
Green Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Was that your Lauren Bacall impersonation? Oh wait, that was "I like that, I'd like more" : ) Thanks so much John.
Adams Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 6:32 PM
you can tell a wonderful story and keep the reader hanging on your every word...you can't tell us there are two more parts and not share them, i look forward to reading them my friend...beautiful penning! Hugs :)
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September 27, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thanks so much Sandy. I will post the other two later today. I am thrilled you liked this one.
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