I HEARD DEATH WHISPERING MY NAME

In the shallows of junkyard avenue
Where fiery-red stallions are mounted by devils
And desolation is your last cigarette

I staggered from the weight of her kiss
As distant cannons sounded
And angels sought shelter
Fear is often the lonesome traveler
And I drank from her cup, hungrily, thirsty

She was my sustenance, my manna from heaven
And I courted her with both wine and sweet song
I lived in her dead embrace
And never tired of her hot breath on my flesh

A man can bookmark his soul with a thousand
wounds
Yet never own a dream
I left her a rose and words that I can no longer
remember
In the hidden places; on the darkest of nights
She whispers still

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Date: 4/1/2025 3:38:00 AM
Powerful poem...and the ending too, she whispers still. Well done :)
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William HAYNES
Date: 4/1/2025 12:03:00 PM
It's what I call my pre-med period. I'm bipolar and the meds seem to dampen the muse as well as keep my moods even. Check out my ode to death in the short story section. It lingers there read by few.
Date: 3/31/2025 9:41:00 PM
Brilliant! I’ll make this a fav for sure
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William HAYNES
Date: 4/1/2025 11:55:00 AM
thanks
Date: 3/30/2025 11:24:00 AM
- A profound poem, William -
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William HAYNES
Date: 3/30/2025 1:30:00 PM
wasn't sure about posting the darker stuff/ thanks
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