I Hear the Flow

I hear the flow of a cold Winter stream--- some blocked water Russell Sivey

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/1/2012 4:55:00 PM

descriptive, flowing 'ku, russell...your senses come alive! best winning hugggs!..:) SOUP MAIL!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/29/2012 5:41:00 AM

like this Russell, so appropriate, harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2012 8:14:00 PM

yep, nothing beats pizza AND popcorn!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2012 8:13:00 PM

Yes, now this one you can really picture AND hear the flow!!! (thanks for your comments. You are so good at leaving fun comments)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2012 7:30:00 PM

another visual delight with a statement of the winter cold.. good luck if for Chaz contest luv.. and thankxx Russell so very much for my win in Sedoka contest luv.. very appreciative as u enjoyed my words of Ecstasy..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/28/2012 5:29:00 PM

I have seen this serene scene at the arboretum where I walk often...very very picturesque! Ps..Today is my birthday, Russell, and winning first in your sedoka contest meant so much to me. I wrote this poem for a young man who is serving time in prison to inspire him to remember the GOOD TIMES. Hugs and thanks a million. Love, Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2012 4:58:00 PM

Interesting work..I had to read it before it soaked into my brain..Must be tired...Reads like a winner..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..I guess that I must have not placed a s on current and you were letting me know..Sara