I Hear the Elves Laughing

Hidden in the recesses of the shipwrecked tree
Unseen by those who believe not in elementals
A world was furiously happening on the sly
I pretended to not hear, coaxing them with my ignorance

Being born with dog ears, I heard the elves laughter
They work harder and more exuberantly than brownies.
Had they felled this tree? Or had it been downed by pixies?
I heard their tittering laughs and they are the fierce ones.

What are you doing? My companion asked me.
She would not notice an elemental if it sat on her nose.
I resolved to come back later, alone. 
I could tell they were in the throes of getting ready for a feast.

Luckily, this shipwrecked tree had the distinction
Of being a marvelously beautiful bit of nature 
Something you do not see more than once a lifetime 
No wonder she had been claimed by the fey.

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Date: 1/21/2021 3:42:00 PM
The plight of this wonderous shipwrecked tree, and its suffering at the hands of the elementals forces, a prize among prizes I suppose, but; still a sad tale for the tree . . . : (
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/21/2021 8:29:00 PM
Our world is no longer a great place for trees.
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