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I Hear Santas Sleigh

I HEAR SANTA’S SLEIGH ooh, i hear Santa’s sleigh! how much does he weigh and his payload and deer - will my roof hold up this year? his white fur boots precarious - i shouldn’t think him nefarious, yet he climbs into my home leaving me gifts of crumbs and loam. the shivering reindeer bells too loud like a too White Christmas crowd - a disheveled snow avalanche in my ear those naughty tapping hoofs of deer. “...and to all a good night,” as the big man drives out of sight, and i want badly to give him the finger as the foul smell of droppings linger. 12/21/2018 Caren Krutsinger’s Contest - BUNNY JUMP

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Date: 12/31/2018 1:14:00 PM
ha ha this is so funny especially the ending Kim, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, sweet Jan! Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2018 9:41:00 AM
Which finger might that be? LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest with this one, Kim! Happy 2019. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 12/21/2018 3:25:00 PM
clearly right...santa the carnival barker cries hohohobuybuybuy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 4:51:00 PM
So true
Date: 12/21/2018 3:25:00 PM
Ooh, just remember if you give him the finger than you may not get anything else except droppings! I love it, very cute and original.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2018 4:51:00 PM
LOL...just being funny ;)

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