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I Hear My Heart Call

My lonely voice pierces the silent night No one will hear me in the saddest dark Stars aloft hold no comfort or delight They shine not for me on their journey's arc The face I see fades in the tear-stained sky I call out for only one more minute Still, I question all the reasons for why My world is lifeless without you in it In my loneliness, I reach out in vain Find nothing but two hands trembling still And grasp only the hollow dark of pain This emptiness found I will never fill I hear my heart call in the silent night I watch love's world scatter beyond the light 8/9/19 writing challenge 1, August 2019 Just Write sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 8/15/2019 7:38:00 AM
Such a stunning sonnet Frederic,many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:14:00 PM
This is impeccable writing Frederic, congrats on a worthy win!
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Date: 8/13/2019 1:01:00 PM
This is such a gorgeous sonnet. I love reading poetry with feelings that touch the heart as this one does Frederic. This is truly deserving of your first placement. Congratulations my friend! The music added to this piece doubles it's pleasure! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:23:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent write and I love the music too
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:53:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet. Congrats on a first place win.
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:17:00 PM
An excellent Sonnet Frederic, much enjoyed, many congrats. :)
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:01:00 PM
why are there no comments? This is amazing and well deserving of a top win, congrats dear man :)-luloo
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