I Have a Dream

I lay my head down on the cloud and close my eyes,
There seems no need for goodnights, Im expecting no surprise,
I'm not going anywhere, but i know i'll travel in my mind,
I'll visit all my favorite places on this earth you'd never find,
 
I love to feel away, in a world all my own,
It's what had helped me form myself, It's the way that i have grown,
I share this with my friends, in imaginary lands,
Although i know created by subconscious i feel the vibrations from the bands
 
As the music in my head continuously rings,
I always stand in awe as the people stand to dance and the gorgeous woman sings,
Not any ordinary woman, a fairy some would say,
using the voice, all her own, in an extraordinary way
 
I listen, lost in awe, as the scene begins to fade away,
Unexpectedly I'm tossed into a new reality full of sadness, colored gray,
Here I am not unfamiliar having visited before,
I have walked through these haunted hallways, ventured through every door,
 
The rooms contain the bones and ghosts that haunt me, i keep them all at rest,
It's not that I like the pain it brings, it's just what i know is for the best,
This place reminds me of the past, where i will rarely venture through,
This place holds the memories of anger and regret, this is where they grew
 
I close my eyes afraid, although I've tried to hide the fear,
I feel that i must show it and release it now to make my vision truly clear,
When my eyes they slowly open, I'm not anywhere i was,
I'm laying in my bed, worried head, feelings in a buzz
 
I love escaping sometimes, but i thank god for my strong soul,
And while i can escape life while i sleep, only awake do i feel whole,
And I think I like it better, the real over the fake,
As long as we can teach this world to give not only take.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/13/2014 9:31:00 PM
Oh this is smoother, dreamier write for you, the light and dark are still there, but the words seems like a rocking ship on waves rather than a storm. I love your explorations between real and fake. well done :)
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Date: 6/3/2014 5:27:00 PM
This is little different from you Eric..I like it....Tim
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