Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

I Found A Hair In My Eggroll

I found a hair in my egg roll  
                    Lipstick was left on my glass 
Discounted prices, no wonder
                      Bean curd is giving me gas

Cracks in the dishes are nothing
             Cracks in the seats are too much
My bottom’s nearly deflated  
              Next thing, the floor it will touch

Speaking of floors, they’re so sticky
               My foot stepped out of my shoe
An hour you’ve been in the bathroom  
                 Search party’s looking for you

Get me the check, where’s my cookie
                 Ugh, there’s no fortune inside
Chow Mein is starting to rumble
              Yuk! I think something has died

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Jan Allison October 13, 2024 at 2:31 PM yeuk yeuk and yeuk again, you made me lol - just don't take me there when i come to visit lol:-) hugs Jan xx son just spent a few days in San Francisco at a google mentor's event, sounds like he had an amazing time:-) hgs Jan xx Jan Allison October 14, 2024 at 8:48 AM The lure of the chocolate table for the mentors was a great success lol, son took 2 boxes of isle of man 3 legs chocolates:-) trip of a lifetime for him but they do the mentoring work for free so its nice to be rewarded:-) hugs Jan xx Mike Gentile October 13, 2024 at 8:08 PM I will definitely take you to a much nicer place Jan, for sure!!! I went to San Francisco last year, many beautiful things there, glad he had fun!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Duke Beaufort October 7, 2024 at 3:23 PM Too funny Mike...I have to make this a favorite. I also had to read it to my wife and we were laughing hysterically. I could barely read it while maintaining a semblance of normal expression. Mike Gentile October 9, 2024 at 5:53 AM Duke that makes me so happy, if I can give you a chuckle, that's all I can ask for!!! Thank you!! Mike Gentile October 9, 2024 at 5:53 AM Duke that makes me so happy, if I can give you a chuckle, that's all I can ask for!!! Thank you!!

Hilda Greenhough October 2, 2024 at 3:19 AM What a terrible experience. Always let your nose be your guide. If a restaurant doesn't smell squeaky clean, don't go. I did enjoy the laughter this poem gave. The funny, rhyming story is riveting. Mike Gentile October 5, 2024 at 4:13 PM Thank you so much Hilda !

Heidi Sands September 29, 2024 at 11:35 AM Lol...wherever that is, I hope I don't end up there. Happy Sunday Mike :) Mike Gentile September 30, 2024 at 11:24 AM Heidi, thank you so much XXOO, Happy Monday!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu September 27, 2024 at 2:58 PM Hello Mike, I do not think you will be going on a date to the restaurant ever again. Happy Friday xxxxxx-oooooo. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu September 30, 2024 at 10:46 AM Hello Mike, i would not go there either. I am glad you will not there there either on aq date. Happy Monday. xxxxxooooo./Darlene/ Mike Gentile September 29, 2024 at 10:37 AM I will not indeed, happy Sunday xxoo

Aurore Severo September 27, 2024 at 1:05 AM haha I laughed, this was great! Mike Gentile September 29, 2024 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much Aurore!!

Victor Buhagiar September 26, 2024 at 9:14 AM One must be careful where one goes for lunch or dinner. Some places are a disgrace. At least here in Malta, we have regular inspections. Mike Gentile September 26, 2024 at 11:49 AM We do too Victor yet sometimes... Thank you!!

Gershon Wolf September 21, 2024 at 9:32 PM Excellent social commentary, Mike... Welcome to the Second Phase of the 'New Normal:' Are we having fun yet?! (Smirk). Mike Gentile September 26, 2024 at 11:48 AM Yes indeed GW, Thanks !!

Paula Goldsmith September 21, 2024 at 10:06 AM I enjoyed reading your fun write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed it. Been a hard week here. Guess you will go to a different place to eat. Oh no, no fortune inside the cookie. You need your money back. Have a blessed/fun weekend................ Mike Gentile September 26, 2024 at 11:48 AM Thank you Paula xxoo

Tom Cunningham September 20, 2024 at 8:25 AM That restaurant best avoided, name and shame lol. Enjoy your weekend Mike Tom Mike Gentile September 26, 2024 at 11:48 AM Indeed Tom, Thanks !