Carrie Richards Poet Limerick

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I Flew the Coop

After driving so far down the road,
I needed some sleep, so I slowed.
A sign said "motel"......
but one cannot tell,
when the weirdo is due to explode !!

This motel had declared a good rate.
So,  I checked into my room, rather late.
But the price should be lower!
Compromised in the shower
By proprietor,  young Norman Bates !!

I ran fast down the road, like a chicken !
While forgetting my clothes, panic-stricken !
No more showers,  for me ! !
No more bubble bath glee  ! !
Bare-assed, I might be, ....but still kickin'  !!!!!



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4/30/15  For The Contest Sponsored By Tammy Reams

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Skat A June 2, 2015 at 12:12 AM Carrie, congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**

Sandra Haight June 1, 2015 at 3:31 PM Carrie, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Yours was an excellent take on the theme for sure! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2015 at 3:23 PM haha, you made it into pure comedy. Do you watch Bates Motel? Gosh, is that ever a good and creepy show!! Congrats on your win.

Seren Roberts June 1, 2015 at 3:22 PM Loved it, especially the bare assed line. Still laughing....Seren

Eve Roper June 1, 2015 at 1:24 PM Haha.. love it... a 7 Congratulations on your win :~)

Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 11:16 AM Oh I love your take on the theme a great poem to take the top spot - I would have run too! Hugs Jan xx

King Ochayi James May 3, 2015 at 5:04 AM Great work

Aarushi Pandey May 3, 2015 at 4:04 AM i just have 3 words for this poem W-O-W seriously!!!!!!!!!

Tim Ryerson May 2, 2015 at 4:44 AM The last line is the real 'kicker' and I'm sure it's not a good feeling to be 'couped up' in a shower with Mr. Bates on the loose...SO nice to see you write funny stuff my friend and this may be your funniest...