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I Fit Nonsense Together

Ant art they are smarts
                             Bob slob has a big knob
                                      cat rat
                                      can an
                                      dairies
                                      collect
                                      milk at
                                      dinner
                            cat in the hat looks like
                            big bumps on the jumps



ping pang pooh do          jump pretty ponys            ping pong doodle
zing bitty doddlers          as fast as you can            zing minkey milk
wing                                    cars                              gin do
zing                                     bars                              box so
bing howdy                           food                              zing to
campfire is                            loud                              box to
ting                                     boat                              can bo
ring                                     goat                              bee at
bing                                     sign                              see me
lings                            cows jumps higher                   are hoo
sings                           dogs grow up fast                    see he

Copyright © Pam Deremer | Year Posted 2015

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Cherl Dunn Date: 10/7/2015 6:26:00 PM Dear Pam I thought this one was funny, and inventive, had to come back for a second read, love how you put it all together in such an unusal way, it fits just right omg, pon intended, cool job, and thanks for the review on my Egyptian poem, I also love Egypt it is a fasinaeting culture, and the legends are out of this world, thanks again, cheri Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 10/7/2015 6:36:00 PM Your welcome to read any of my poems more than once. LOL

Cherl Dunn Date: 9/28/2015 5:32:00 PM Dear pam LOL wow what a unique style you have here my friend, cool and inspirational refreshing, You seems to make everything fit in just the right detailing, I'll read another, cheri Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 9/28/2015 7:30:00 PM Thank you for your comment and for reading other poems of mine.

Pat Davis Date: 9/25/2015 12:26:00 AM Pam, these are very funny poems and a new creative style. Do you invent this new style? I'd love to see the illustrations to go with your BEE and I FIT poems! :) Pat Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 9/25/2015 11:16:00 AM Since I'm pretty new to all this I'm not sure if there is a style like this.

Gerald Dillenbeck Date: 9/24/2015 6:30:00 PM There is clearly something wrong with you, and I think it is both fun and interesting; so wrong feels right to me wing ding zinging away. Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 9/25/2015 11:14:00 AM Thank you!

Norberto Franco Cisneros Date: 9/23/2015 4:56:00 PM I am impressed with your creativity. Enjoyed them. Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 9/24/2015 11:24:00 AM Thank you very much.

David Fisher Date: 9/22/2015 7:29:00 PM I think you fit nonsense perfectly...I think most of us are nonsensically fit rather than physically fit anyways. I agree, it is a shape or concrete poem. Login to Reply Pam Deremer Date: 9/23/2015 12:22:00 PM Thank you for your comment.