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I Fit Nonsense Together

Ant art they are smarts Bob slob has a big knob cat rat can an dairies collect milk at dinner cat in the hat looks like big bumps on the jumps ping pang pooh do jump pretty ponys ping pong doodle zing bitty doddlers as fast as you can zing minkey milk wing cars gin do zing bars box so bing howdy food zing to campfire is loud box to ting boat can bo ring goat bee at bing sign see me lings cows jumps higher are hoo sings dogs grow up fast see he

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/7/2015 6:26:00 PM

Dear Pam I thought this one was funny, and inventive, had to come back for a second read, love how you put it all together in such an unusal way, it fits just right omg, pon intended, cool job, and thanks for the review on my Egyptian poem, I also love Egypt it is a fasinaeting culture, and the legends are out of this world, thanks again, cheri

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/7/2015 6:36:00 PM

Your welcome to read any of my poems more than once. LOL

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/28/2015 5:32:00 PM

Dear pam LOL wow what a unique style you have here my friend, cool and inspirational refreshing, You seems to make everything fit in just the right detailing, I'll read another, cheri

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/28/2015 7:30:00 PM

Thank you for your comment and for reading other poems of mine.

Pat Davis

Date: 9/25/2015 12:26:00 AM

Pam, these are very funny poems and a new creative style. Do you invent this new style? I'd love to see the illustrations to go with your BEE and I FIT poems! :) Pat

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/25/2015 11:16:00 AM

Since I'm pretty new to all this I'm not sure if there is a style like this.

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 9/24/2015 6:30:00 PM

There is clearly something wrong with you, and I think it is both fun and interesting; so wrong feels right to me wing ding zinging away.

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/25/2015 11:14:00 AM

Thank you!

Norberto Franco Cisneros

Date: 9/23/2015 4:56:00 PM

I am impressed with your creativity. Enjoyed them.

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/24/2015 11:24:00 AM

Thank you very much.

David Fisher

Date: 9/22/2015 7:29:00 PM

I think you fit nonsense perfectly...I think most of us are nonsensically fit rather than physically fit anyways. I agree, it is a shape or concrete poem.

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/23/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thank you for your comment.