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I Felt You Pick My Hands and Squeeze Them Tight

I felt you pick my hands and squeeze them tight And smother them with kisses mixed with tears, Then words exclaimed with grief came to my ears-- All sweet, all good, and all devoid of spite. Somehow I felt your anguish and your pain, So I spoke up to try to comfort you; But then I found my words could not get through, And things were just occurring in my brain. You brushed my hair and bent to kiss my lips; For the last time you whispered you loved me; Then you arranged my hands across my chest. I sensed all these before I came to grips With where I was and the reality That I was to be laid down to my rest. April 5, 2023 I Died Poety Contest Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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Date: 4/7/2023 6:18:00 PM
Great one, Ryan, well described:)
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:58:00 AM
Sad poem but true to life. I felt the emotions throughout--great poetry, Ryan.
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/5/2023 4:38:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 4/5/2023 6:48:00 AM
Another good one,Ryan. You do sonnets very well. Good luck!
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/5/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel.

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