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I Felt In Heaven In My Attic Room

I felt it heaven in my attic room Overtaken by a silent peace through parted curtains I saw it was the snow had come to veil the land with ribbons from the sky. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/13/2014 5:00:00 PM

Yes, you've captured the mood very well. You always do. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/19/2012 1:51:00 PM

Marvelous language and imagery! There certainly is a 'silent peace' to this piece!! There is a peace unlike any other after a fresh snowfall... Keith

Gail Debole

Date: 4/7/2012 7:29:00 PM

We all need to experience calm relaxing moments like the one you describe so well.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/28/2012 4:00:00 PM

enjoyed....you have a poetic expression that is hauntingly drawing!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/5/2012 4:58:00 AM

:-) I too have felt Heaven in surprising places. I felt it in firm, wet sand once as I heard a family laugh. Lovely, this. Much with little. I'm sipping coffee and reading, knowing a monkey is about to explode awake any minute. Hugs to you and thank you for the warmth and energy and friendship you are bringing to the Soup Mix... Cyndi

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/5/2012 6:52:00 AM

Cyndi -- Thank you. It's those tiny spiritual awakenings make a life happy. Coffee helps too. love, Kathy