I Felt Your Love

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I felt your love within my soul; fueling passion in my heart. Though hope's known to levy a toll, I fell in love right from the start. Now, nothing can keep us apart; for fate is in complete control. And whenever we had to part, I felt your love within my soul. Facing daunting days dark as coal, you were my guiding light, sweetheart. I was broken; you made me whole, fueling passion in my heart. You didn't hit pause or press restart, unlike lovers playing a role. Offering my heart a jumpstart, I felt your love within my soul. It seemed an impossible goal, fueling passion in my heart. Yet, despite the rigamarole, I had found my soul's counterpart. When love is real, doubts depart, and we often laugh and cajole. My silhouette, to you, is art, holding hands on a moonlight stroll, I felt your love.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/11/2023 7:48:00 AM

Wonderfully romantic Emile. And in perfect form. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2023 9:02:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/10/2023 8:07:00 PM

I read the constraints of a Rondeau Redouble and decided only a poetic genius could manage to write a beautiful poem following all those rules. I bow to a genius ! Emile, off line in a corner of a room I will try. If no one on Soup ever sees me again you can report to them all I have gone Rondeau round the bend. Mean while your poem is breathtaking. A favorite for sure.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2023 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Wendy, I must admit this was not an easy poem format to follow, it took a great deal of my time to write. As always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.