I Can Feel Your Love

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I can feel your love in my soul fueling passion in my heart. And for the first time, I feel whole, falling in love right from the start. Now nothing can keep us apart, for fate is in complete control. And at those times, we need to part, I can feel your love in my soul. And through dreadful days dark as coal, you are my guiding light, sweetheart. I felt hollow; you fill that hole, fueling passion in my heart. You don't hit pause or press restart, unlike someone playing a role. Offering my heart a jumpstart, I can feel your love in my soul. It seemed an impossible goal, fueling passion in my heart. Yet, despite the rigamarole, I have found my soul's counterpart. When two join as one, doubts depart, and couples oft laugh and cajole. My silhouette, to you, is art, and when we take a moonlight stroll, I can feel your love.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/11/2023 7:48:00 AM

Wonderfully romantic Emile. And in perfect form. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2023 9:02:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/10/2023 8:07:00 PM

I read the constraints of a Rondeau Redouble and decided only a poetic genius could manage to write a beautiful poem following all those rules. I bow to a genius ! Emile, off line in a corner of a room I will try. If no one on Soup ever sees me again you can report to them all I have gone Rondeau round the bend. Mean while your poem is breathtaking. A favorite for sure.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2023 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Wendy, I must admit this was not an easy poem format to follow, it took a great deal of my time to write. As always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.