I Feel the Silent Cry

Written by
Paula Swanson  7/31/2011


A hand held out in supplicance, ignored, wanting nothing more, than to feed a child. The dry cough of an ancient river bed, where once a great river ran wild. The last leaf to fall from a tree, when from mankind, denied a drink. The slow motion action, before a wreck. Those seconds, when your heart sinks. The times when nothing that they say, changes how you act or what you do. The fall from grace, you try to hide. From those who look up to you. The words that flow from your pen, that your tongue cannot vocalize. Dreaded mortality, that is ever present, reveals a clarity you humanize.
**Note: The shape of the poem, represents the vessel that holds mankind's tears For the contest: Sounds Of A Cry.... Sponsored by Michael J. Falotico Placement: 4th
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Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Paula. Love, Carol
Beadnall Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Well done Paula and congrats blessings Paul
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 3:50 AM
hey Paula, congrats on your win, David
Quigley Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:48 AM
Nicely written Paula. Congratulations on your win
Johnson Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Nicely done Paula. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Congrats Paula on your excellent win with these lovely words as always my friend..touching..luv..
Susan Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:21 PM
cool shape. many beautiful phrases and deep thoughts in this one. good luck in the contest!
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:49 PM
excellent thoughts~~~~ a winner~~~*-*junjun~~~smile for this great art of yours~~~*-*
Dufresne Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:33 PM
a double dipper of a poem and more, Paula. Good luck in the contest . should do well
Cooke Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:30 PM
excellent write, great poetry i like a lot
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Beautiful imaganitive write...God bless...old Jack....good luck on contest
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