I Fear Its Stench

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Feeling a rumbling deep in my gut I'm not quite sure what that’s all about as I clench the sphincter in my butt. Something rank is trying to get out and based upon my bloated bowel it's going to succeed; I've no doubt. I might need to throw in the towel as past experiences affirm and yet, I fear its stench could be foul. An internal pressure makes me squirm and I’m counting down to the blastoff when this gassy build-up comes to term. There is no way I can put this off and yet, to concede may not be smart even when it’s disguised, with a cough. What if it turns out it's not a fart, but its embarrassing counterpart? Terza Rima 04,04,2019 quirky tercets poetry contest Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2019 6:46:00 PM

oh Emile this is hilariarse I love a good poopy poem and this is a blast!:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2019 9:31:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I always like to hear from you my friend, Emile.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/1/2019 10:34:00 AM

Emile this is hilarious! This is a winner for sure!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/1/2019 12:02:00 PM

Thanks P.S., I always like to hear from you my friend, Emile.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 4/16/2019 6:16:00 AM

Your dilemma is so real I know exactly how you feel When the rumble at the start Indicates you need to fart Let me give you some advice Pooping instead will not be nice Since you'll be left standing there In your now soiled underwear

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/16/2019 7:36:00 AM

Thanks Curtis, I appreciate your funny reply of support my friend, Emile.