I Exist---

Someone hear me, someone cheer me, Someone tell them i exist... SO what I am a crawler, SO what I can't sing louder.. I am not dead yet, Tell them I exist.... Many sins I have done, Either by mistake OR for fun.. Weight of my demon days drowning me into the ground.. SO what I am studded deep, I am still making sound... SO what it's just a '"hiss'" I am not dead yet Tell them I exist...

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Date: 1/18/2014 2:57:00 AM

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Date: 1/11/2014 5:47:00 AM

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Ankit Dedha
Date: 1/11/2014 10:51:00 AM

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