I Envy the Woman Whose Lips

i envy the woman whose lips 
your ample mouth has gently kissed 
whose very look enslaves your soul 
i ponder yet all i have missed 
  
i envy her still whose arms 
press you to her breasts so tenderly 
who shares your secret hopes and dreams 
and keeps your fire burning steadily 
  
i envy the woman whose bed 
your long lean body slumbers in 
forgive my heart's dear love desires 
that which others consider a sin 
  
i envy the woman i don't even know 
who possesses what i can only desire 
to be empowered by someone so fine 
i envy her body-her soul on fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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J.T. Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 12:41 AM
I can feel the fiery passion exude your words. Good job
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 3:43 PM
A lost love with someone else...totally relateable, Very Good! MC
Gabriella Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 10:03 PM
I can totally relate to this. Such a beautiful and touching write. Reminded me of a situation of my own. Very nice job!
Brigham Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 3:41 AM
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them very much. Faith
Tacito Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 8:53 PM
As a man, I've been in your shoes. This is never, ever easy. Time will help heal. Kudos to you for this ripping & honest poem!
Brigham Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 3:42 AM
I'm honored by your wonderful comments. Thank you so much. Faith
A  Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 6:58 PM
wow! now that's a women heart of honest. usually I keep the envy to myself. I am going to cry for you. You know why? no one should ever have to step back and watch another take her place after all the heartaches. how much more can we take? enjoyed. skat
Brigham Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 3:46 AM
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. It was hard to deal with but I'm fine now. I poured my heart out on paper and that always helps. Many thanks for your wonderful feedback. Faith
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