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I Dug For Her In That Garden

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            Deeper and deeper
                     I dug
          through that parched
                     earth
                    for her
                 yes for her

        And what did I exhume
                   disinter 

                    Gold
                    Gold
                 yes gold 

                 Yes hun
           I’ve just found it

        your other gold post

mysterylight verse

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Joanmarie Peranteau

Date: 1/1/2011 9:19:00 PM

Hello there Bro. Luv this....had me going for a minute, then you hit me w/that last verse....LOL, funny!!!! I'm new on poetry soup, only wrote one on here so far....JoanMarie

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 10/27/2010 8:45:00 AM

Hello James, Love the imagination in this one, very funny also. Thank you for looking in on me. I am going to read more of yours today. Like what I see. ] As Always, Shar

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/27/2010 8:31:00 AM

How are you as a plumber? Great inigma and poetry James. enjoyed. Back to reading. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2010 7:03:00 PM

So cute,James! Keep digging, I lost one too. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 10/24/2010 8:14:00 AM

I really got my teeth into this one. Am I understanding "gold post" right? Whatever. I like this poem mucho. Love, Dave

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/23/2010 10:12:00 PM

Very cute poem James,you entertain us with your lovely sweet verses,Hope i catch up with your earlier work and Hope Noah is ok dear :)Celene.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2010 9:46:00 PM

hahaha, I love how the mind imagines something else before realizing it's earrings!! LUv , Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/22/2010 7:41:00 PM

Hehe James, I just love this witty write! Reckon you scored some browny points then? ;) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/22/2010 4:42:00 PM

So important to a fine lady luv.. a grand write James and luv my gold as well ... a brilliant piece of gentlemanly charm... helping a damsel in distress... so James..luv..happy weekend...

Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2010 3:13:00 PM

This is so funny, you sure have a great sense of humour, loved it~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/22/2010 12:56:00 PM

Very funny and humorous write you penned so well, James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2010 11:07:00 AM

That is love to dig for a gold post...I hope that she appreciated that hard work that you put forth to please...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you doing that...Sara