James Peranteau Poet Light Verse

I Dug For Her In That Garden

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            Deeper and deeper
                     I dug
          through that parched
                     earth
                    for her
                 yes for her

        And what did I exhume
                   disinter 

                    Gold
                    Gold
                 yes gold 

                 Yes hun
           I’ve just found it

        your other gold post

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Joanmarie Peranteau January 1, 2011 at 9:19 PM Hello there Bro. Luv this....had me going for a minute, then you hit me w/that last verse....LOL, funny!!!! I'm new on poetry soup, only wrote one on here so far....JoanMarie

Sharon Ruebel October 27, 2010 at 8:45 AM Hello James, Love the imagination in this one, very funny also. Thank you for looking in on me. I am going to read more of yours today. Like what I see. ] As Always, Shar

Joyce Johnson October 27, 2010 at 8:31 AM How are you as a plumber? Great inigma and poetry James. enjoyed. Back to reading. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire October 26, 2010 at 7:03 PM So cute,James! Keep digging, I lost one too. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin October 24, 2010 at 8:14 AM I really got my teeth into this one. Am I understanding "gold post" right? Whatever. I like this poem mucho. Love, Dave

C.C Bloomsfield October 23, 2010 at 10:12 PM Very cute poem James,you entertain us with your lovely sweet verses,Hope i catch up with your earlier work and Hope Noah is ok dear :)Celene.

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2010 at 9:46 PM hahaha, I love how the mind imagines something else before realizing it's earrings!! LUv , Andrea

Wilma Neels October 22, 2010 at 7:41 PM Hehe James, I just love this witty write! Reckon you scored some browny points then? ;) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 22, 2010 at 4:42 PM So important to a fine lady luv.. a grand write James and luv my gold as well ... a brilliant piece of gentlemanly charm... helping a damsel in distress... so James..luv..happy weekend...

Constance La France October 22, 2010 at 3:13 PM This is so funny, you sure have a great sense of humour, loved it~~

Dr.Ram Mehta October 22, 2010 at 12:56 PM Very funny and humorous write you penned so well, James

Sara Kendrick October 22, 2010 at 11:07 AM That is love to dig for a gold post...I hope that she appreciated that hard work that you put forth to please...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you doing that...Sara

Joe Flach October 22, 2010 at 9:25 AM How easy it is to be the hero to someone you love and loves you - if only you dig a little deeper. Loved this little dinty, James. Joe

Francine Roberts October 22, 2010 at 7:58 AM lol, love it

Chuck Keys October 22, 2010 at 7:45 AM cute story. thanks, chuck