Raul Moreno Poet Quatrain

I Drove You Away

I loved you so much,
That I drove you away.
And it hurts deep inside,
That I won’t hear you say,

Anything in your tone again;
I’ll never hear your voice.
My mistakes caught up,
And I made a poor choice.

I miss you and I love you,
And I know I always will.
It hard going on without you,
My broken heart won’t heal.

You’re always in my mind,
I think about you everyday.
And I loved you so much,
That I drove you away.






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Note: just a poem

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Darleen Bilyeu February 11, 2009 at 11:23 AM sounds like a really heartfelt poem, i like it.

Monique Davis February 6, 2009 at 10:32 AM Absolutely amazing! You wrote the very emotions that I couldn't speak.- Monique

Danielle Moreno February 3, 2009 at 2:36 AM It has to be the hardest thing to not hear someone's voice. On top of that faulting ourselves. Great poem, your words are worth reading............Danielle

Abe Lopez February 2, 2009 at 5:57 PM Sometimes we are own worst enemy. We sometimes over-love things...........nice

Wathuto Pearl David February 2, 2009 at 2:33 AM It maybe just a poem but it definately reflects what I once did. Its wonderful, I couldn't have expressed it in a better way. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Wathuto

Elizabeth Neal February 1, 2009 at 10:18 PM Beautifully crafted, typical Raul laying out his creative heart. Love E.

Steve Edmonds February 1, 2009 at 12:30 AM Although it's just a poem, a lot of emotion is written here, great job.

Tyler Martin January 28, 2009 at 4:10 AM Just A Poem With Complete Awe, Great Words Outlining Someone's Broken Heart. Tyler

Daniel Neal January 27, 2009 at 11:48 PM Wow, the emotion in this one is powerful. Your writings are full of emotion and have an enormous depth to them. DN

Michael Jordan January 26, 2009 at 3:40 AM Raul this poem speaks a far to often truth - I have found that often people see those they love as something to possess rather than caress - great job on this - God Bless, MJ

January 25, 2009 at 9:23 AM It's sad how we can drive people away with some poor choices. I think most will relate to this poem. Nice use of rhyme. Glad it is just a poem and not about you. Keep on writing. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen

Sharon Winter January 25, 2009 at 8:49 AM Raul, hope this is not a reflection on reality, as it is definitely their loss. Awesome rhyme and flow edged in sadness and longing. So sorry to read about my friend HG below. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire January 25, 2009 at 8:10 AM Hello my name is Elizabeth Special please dont say anything about my name I am a student of the Chef's YOU would know as HG The Chef is in the Hospital I am at his cabin taking care of his dogs and cats. He gave me a list of poets he wants me to contact. He said to thank you for comments and part 2 will be late Sunday or early Monday morning I am not a poet but this is a nice poem Yours Respectfully LIZ

Brian Strand January 25, 2009 at 7:52 AM A sad 'what might have been' Raul.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Kristin Reynolds January 25, 2009 at 3:56 AM What a heartfelt poem Raul, very pretty, love Kristin

Robin L. Gass January 24, 2009 at 8:08 PM Very sad but very touching. I think we can all draw from our pasts and relate to feeling this way in the course of our lives. Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick January 24, 2009 at 7:44 PM Sure it's just a poem..? We often write about things that have touched us deeply. Its a really nice write, regardless. I always look forward to seeing your posts. BG

Carrie Richards January 24, 2009 at 6:17 PM Nicely done, Raul....(and so glad to know it is just a poem, otherwise, it would be even more sad to know that this was real). Carrie

Tyesha Ehigiator January 24, 2009 at 4:53 PM Very interesting, much to think about here..I do know from experience that it is possible to love someone so much you feel like if they were gone, that life could not go on..But when they leave , you are still there and life went on... Sometimes it's true love and other times it's obsession..the fear of not wanting to be alone..Maybe..I guess each situation is different..Nevertheless Excellent write..*God Bless Tyesha

Christopher Higgins January 24, 2009 at 4:50 PM This is a wonderful poem Raul. The love is very clear in this piece. Enjoyed the read.

Laurie Ginn January 24, 2009 at 3:28 PM I agree Donna probably eeewwy, gooey clinginess. Good poem though. Laurie

Donna Golden January 24, 2009 at 3:06 PM How ironic...to love someone too much. But I do know this to be true. Of course, it does make one wonder...is it really love? Or neediness? Hmmm...Well done, Raul. Donna G.