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I dreamt last night of you and me

I dreamt last night of you and me, your lips so soft I kissed We floated on a silken cloud, drew rainbows on the mist Then counted daisies in a field and when your smile appeared I gathered up a sweet bouquet that whispered in your ear Made love upon a mountain top, the snow was pure and white Then marveled at a hummingbird its tiny wings a’ flight We rode inside a trolley car up hills and over dales Setting forth to distant shores with paisley colored sails Caught moonbeams in a Mason jar, and poured them on our skin Then there neath jealous fireflies we made sweet love again Set dominoes in a straight line and laughed as they did fall Your evening gown and brand new shoes were perfect for the ball We caught a flight to someplace near, yet is was also far For when we landed once again we stood upon a star That’s when I heard from listening to someone passing by This evening now came to an end I thought that I might cry But when my eyes did open to your beauty as my view It mattered not what I had dreamt, my dreams had all come true

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Date: 11/13/2016 3:34:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved POTD, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo, I appreciate that.
Date: 11/12/2016 10:57:00 PM
Chris, outstanding poem beautiful flow, fantastic rhyme , so much feeling :) very well desrived pick. Congratulations on Poem of the day Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, I am happy you enjoyed this one
Date: 11/12/2016 8:10:00 PM
Chris congratulations on potd with this wonderful write ~
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks so very much Broken Wings. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 11/12/2016 7:56:00 PM
Lovely, romantic and beautifully written, Chris. Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem Of The Day! 7 Sandra
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for your kind words today. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 11/12/2016 2:56:00 PM
a beautiful romantic dream - lets hope your dreams can come true:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx7
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Jan so very much for your nice comment
Date: 11/12/2016 2:18:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic poem, Chris. Congrats on POTD. Well deserved. Very original like Sunlite said. Excellent write, my friend. Love and peace to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie, I appreciate your visit
Date: 11/12/2016 12:28:00 PM
What a romantic you are, and what originality to express it.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite for your kind thoughts.
Date: 11/12/2016 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations - very emotional and romantic. Great read for lovers...rg
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rhoda.
Date: 11/12/2016 8:11:00 AM
WoW! Chris, now that's some dream. I loved everything about this write. It was soooo romantic and alluring. If I had a dream like you so skillfully wrote about, please let me sleep in. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor my friend:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for your kind words. Go on, sleep in, you have my permission. :)
Date: 11/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving poem of the day Chris! This is a beautiful poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Maurice, I appreciate your visit
Date: 11/12/2016 7:43:00 AM
Chris, to me this is one of your best to date, beautifully written. Congratulations for POTD honors, most well deserved...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:13:00 PM
WOW you just fired up my poetry adrenaline in a big time excited way! This is awesome writing, and that excites me. FAV and 7 and another WOW ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2016 8:32:00 AM
I am happy I was able to bring that feeling to you with this one CayCay. I am so thrilled you liked it and it may have inspired you to write. Thank you for reading and leaving such wonderful words for me.
Date: 11/10/2016 9:47:00 AM
To draw rainbows on the mist...How lovely...Mountain tops Romance- How beautiful, Playing dominoes-How much fun, At the ball -How Princes 'like...To find her there How loving that would be..and joyful..and sweet- Such an amazing poem..No wonder such comments below..Lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine. I dream a lot it seems. Someday maybe they will come true... :) Thank you for such beautiful comments on my poem.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:33:00 AM
What a compelling beautifully written dream, so nice Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks so much my sweet friend. I hope all of your dreams are a nice as you are to me.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:21:00 AM
I haven't had a dream like that in awhile. So romantic Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Tim, you will, I'm sure of it.
Date: 11/10/2016 7:55:00 AM
A beautiful love story with a happy ending...we're going to miss you in our Lonely Hearts Club but we wish you good luck. Namaste.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 7:57:00 AM
It's just a dream Phil, I'm not turning in my membership card just yet. : ) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/10/2016 6:40:00 AM
Soft and romantic, well written, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/10/2016 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Jo for always leaving such nice words or me to find. I appreciate your visits.