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I Dreamt It

I dreamt it and now the s c e n e decays and withers away, all those past sorrows that come slithering when I close my eyes; oh, will there be a time when sadness fades, dims and dies, I pray, when I do not linger amongst stones cold and angels weeping; holding a ruby red r o s e while memories come creeping. When even the birds stop singing in my dreamy blue indigo skies, oh, will there be a night of no n i g h t m a r e s when I am sleeping; when I can put my head upon my pillow until the break of day. ____________________________ October 25, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/I Dreamt It Copyright Protected, ID 16-842-292-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, One Specific Rhyme Scheme sponsor, Lu Loo First Place

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Date: 11/23/2016 8:24:00 AM
Just beautiful in it's sadness, yes there will come that day, no more sadness or tears. Congrats on top spot!
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Date: 11/23/2016 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful, heartfelt sadness expressed here. Congrats.
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Date: 11/16/2016 11:40:00 PM
Hi BW. Congratulations on your win. I too loved the deep expressions. Dont dream sad anymore
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Date: 11/9/2016 2:54:00 PM
congrats on your glory with this deep write, constance...huggs
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Date: 11/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st. place win, BW. Barry
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:41:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/9/2016 2:05:00 AM
This is an awesome one, Constance:) congratulations on your lovely win:) it goes into my fave:) a 7:)
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Date: 11/8/2016 4:25:00 PM
You write melancholy poems so so beautifully Constance :-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/8/2016 1:48:00 PM
absolutely beautiful lady...thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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