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I Dreamed a Dream

I dreamed a dream But my dream stuck in an hourglass I cry, I cry As I stare at my own leap of sands You, poor soul of mine! Pen the prelude in the pack of the stars Patiently wait until it becomes like one And itself, bring home the sunrise To my gloomy visage and weary heart Give me the fruit of success Oh! Poor soul of mine! Tomorrow might not say, "Hello" Better undress your mind from all negativities Feed your thoughts with beautiful sceneries Drop off--- that laziness It destroys and kills the entire YOU I am the DREAM you claimed your Better half But when will you free me from the hourglass? Almost, but you've never been here Long have I waited you You will never know how far I could take you to Unless you go the distance And chase me 'til I'm all yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/20/2017 4:23:00 AM
Absolutely amazing! You are very talented! Love reading stuff like this! I hope to read more of your work
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Jennelyn Felicilda
Date: 8/1/2017 12:35:00 AM
You can check out my other poems, Mr. Daniel. Thank you.
Date: 3/14/2017 6:22:00 AM
Hello Jennelyn. This is marvelous poetry and great expression. One that should be read out loud. Keep dreaming the dream. Well done
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Jennelyn Felicilda
Date: 3/14/2017 8:38:00 AM
Oh, thanks! ;)
Date: 3/14/2017 4:20:00 AM
Really cool jennelyn; keep dreaming.
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Jennelyn Felicilda
Date: 3/14/2017 8:39:00 AM
thanks, Phil! ;)

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