Kash Poet Poet Tanka

I Dream To Be Your Dream

I dream to become 
that dream which comes in your sleep
kissing your soft mind
and leaving your sleeping face
ever glowing with bright smile.




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By:kashinath karmakar (11th Feb.2011)

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Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2012 at 2:27 PM guess what? I had faved this one twice by mistake, but I'll keep it that way. It deserves it!!!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet February 20, 2011 at 1:33 PM Quiet a nice tanka really enjoyed it.Thanks for the comment and the congrats.~LOTS OF LOVE~Teresa

Cecil Hickman February 20, 2011 at 11:27 AM such poetic words written for the contest,which shows love and deep emotion, dreams are suppose to be beautiful, and your dream definitely is outstandingly beautiful,,all the best,,and Thank you for visiting my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Sami Helbaoui February 18, 2011 at 10:51 AM Do hope you the best in the contest cause this is Amaaazing! Love it, Sami

Diane Locksley February 17, 2011 at 3:42 PM You can be my dream anytime kashinath. I like the romance in this poem. Good luck in the contest, Diane

C.C Bloomsfield February 16, 2011 at 12:11 AM very beautiful

Jasmine Winters February 15, 2011 at 5:42 PM omg i loved it .... keep up the good work luv

Fabiyas M V February 15, 2011 at 2:17 AM Hot dream indeed,Kashinath.Nicely penned.Wonderful entry for the contest.

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2011 at 3:51 PM OOO ! what a dream, Kas. Kar. ~mighty tastyyyy.. sure love it.. all it needs is a box of choclates.. .. take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,.. Linda

George Aul February 14, 2011 at 7:59 AM Good luck in the contest...I like your Tanka........George

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2011 at 5:50 AM Again I am enjoying these breathtaking lines on this special day of luv dear heart..wishing u a most Happy Valentine's Day with lots and lots of luv ..

John Loving Iii February 13, 2011 at 7:25 AM a rare and wonderful occasion. John H Loving III

Wilma Neels February 13, 2011 at 4:43 AM Kash, I love this, a pure delight to read this afternoon.. All the best for MJF's contest, love Wilma

Nette Onclaud February 13, 2011 at 4:28 AM kashi!! woohoo delight for valentine!! amazing, tender write.. go and win!! ;) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2011 at 11:12 PM Hey, that is cool. Gert calls this one a Sentanka, it's extra special!

Diane Locksley February 12, 2011 at 10:55 AM What a beautiful, romantic dream! Good luck in the contest kashinath. Best to you, Diane

Gert W. Knop February 12, 2011 at 8:50 AM Enjoyed the read of your nice "Sentanka" (I call this on a Sentanka because it is a Senryu combined with the form of a Tanka). Wish you best of siúccess in the contest, Kashinath!......Gert

Constance La France February 11, 2011 at 7:39 PM a beautiful and lovely dream, I love it, and best of luck in the contest~~

James Tate February 11, 2011 at 5:55 PM Great imagination, Kashinath.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 11, 2011 at 12:49 PM Nice write on the dream, kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire February 11, 2011 at 10:27 AM What a lovely entry for the contest, Kashinath! You have such a loving heart. Best wishes for success, my friend. Your tanka made me smile. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2011 at 9:39 AM In case I forgot to click on 7.

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2011 at 9:38 AM BEAUTIFUL, Kashinath. I hope this shoots to the top of the chart. (now I have to think of a wild and crazy one but I am trying to decide if he prefers actual dream or wish/dream type,like you have done.) Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 11, 2011 at 8:37 AM well smiles are definitely in order for this one, kashinath! wishing you the best in the contest :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 11, 2011 at 6:20 AM Romantic words of emotion Kashinath my friend.. enjoyed your Tanka entry for Michael's contest.. much good luck.. a dream like this will want to be had by many ... bright smile is so warming luv..

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