I Dream Poetry In Darkness and Light

| I Dream Poetry in Darkness and Light |

Unbroken, my light rises like deep alluvion of sweet rivulets,
Craving passions and tragedies like written poetries of Juliet.

In softly spoken words I quell, of streamed sheen of sunbeams and spells.
Where worlds of fallen reality and fantasy live in parallel.

Playing with dreams and it's ruinous luminosity, 
Through my skin, I feel its pale softness glow.

For, my ferocious heart beats for disaster and catastrophe.
Between the beginning of dawn and it's closing dusk evenings.

Reaching with ardor towards it's warmth, 
The bitter transparent wind on my lips, I kiss.
Nevertheless, the dark reminds to hide all my mess.

But, this febricity itch with within my hidden fears,
Recoils and quivers like a mournful Mimosa.
Hiding under midnight treacherous treasuries but, I falter closer.

Let me lay in darkness; between these verses.
Let all hatred consume me with unbearable curses.
Let me die within these spiralling pages and vortex verses.

But, the scintillant light lends it's chi, 
reminding my lungs; inhale deep; exhale free,
Like a pretentious vapour; I keep climbing.

My senses swell; atmospheric rising with spring tides fluorescent rhymings.
I move through like osmotic whispers; jolting with winged feathers of sweetened writings.

Because, I dream poetry in darkness and light.
And mourn with unspoken words; simultaneously, day and night.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2023 7:12:00 AM

Daisy, excellent and exceptional writing, I love everything about your poem. "Where worlds of fallen reality and fantasy live in parallel." That is where I live. And there are days when I, "Let me lay in darkness; between these verses." because I just want to disappear. A FAV.

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 12:57:00 PM

You are a true poet that uses poetry as a catharsis as it gives you strength in the face of adversity.. this is a poem that many will relate to and show the strength you have.. I really loved that ending..

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/15/2023 11:58:00 PM

Awww thank you dearest PG I'm honestly touched by your incredible support and this overly beautiful feedback. It's so touching and wonderful to be able to write and connect with you and everyone here. Thank you

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/15/2023 5:36:00 AM

Your writing, Daisy Silk, is extravagantly rich in vivid details that transport the reader to a world of beauty and depth. Your words flow like a river, captivating us with their dramatic imagery and clever rhymes. Your poetic talent is both stunning and dynamic, filled with a profound artistic essence. Congratulations on your well-deserved contest win, and thanks for your uplifting comment on my page.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 11:56:00 PM

This is exorbitant writing, Daisy Silk, very beautiful and deep imagery, may you continue to write and shine:) congratulations:)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2023 12:20:00 PM

Dear Daisy Silk, I am enraptured by your dramatic imagery and your internal and end rhymes. Your poetic pen is both beautiful and dynamic with deep rich artistry. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/14/2023 9:47:00 PM

Aww, such a tender comment, thank you so much Susan. Had so much fun with this piece

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 5:24:00 AM

Its so good to see you write for the contest and there were so many creative lines in this. Especially the ending really was striking. And touching. Thank you for writing.CONGRATULATIONS

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/14/2023 9:46:00 PM

Thank you dearly for placing me in this self soothing prompt and exhilarating comp. There are so many beautiful poems that everyone wrote for your contest. Cannot wait for the next

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2023 4:14:00 AM

Hi Daisy Silk, your poem abounds in wonderful images and metaphors. Among many, I love the following so dearly--"My senses swell; atmospheric rising with spring tides fluorescent rhymings. I move through like osmotic whispers; jolting with winged feathers of sweetened writings." Great composition dear poet friend.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/16/2023 12:01:00 AM

Your compassionate feedback is so touching and can't thank you enough for your support and insight on my poems. Thank you for your time to read my piece my friend