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I Don'T Need You Anymore

You were always close by when I needed you so
I’m really sorry but I have to let you go

You were always there to comfort me
But I don’t need you in my life anymore

I held you so gently in my hands
You were always there to wipe away my tears
 
Sorry I’ve got to drop you so suddenly
You were always there for me in my hour of need

Guess I’m going to have to put my tissue in the bin

Jan Allison
21st November 2014

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Mr Jaybus Date: 11/23/2014 8:40:00 AM Lovin' the little twist at the end x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/23/2014 8:42:00 AM Thank Mr Jaybus - just read your Tired poem its EXCELLENT:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/22/2014 6:24:00 AM HA HA HA HA HA! Oh Jan....this is lovely. I honestly didn't know where this was going...and I was thinking..."This is so unJAN!" I knew you said it was humorous so I kept waiting for the punch line, but it got me by surprise. Lovely write. Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/22/2014 10:29:00 AM Thanks so much Eileen I do like to write with a twist at the end of the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/22/2014 3:43:00 AM This is so sweet n witty Jan! Never cud think that the U was the tissue ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/22/2014 4:52:00 AM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/21/2014 8:48:00 PM ahh, what a cute way to write, Jan. a tissue!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/22/2014 4:51:00 AM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 11/21/2014 2:38:00 PM Tis the season for tons of tissues, hope you get the ones that and soft and comforting. :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 2:42:00 PM Yes I am always prepared Cas - never know when the tears will hit me when I think of dad but I am fine at the moment and he's doing really well:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 11/21/2014 2:27:00 PM I was wondering what it would be.....lol...hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 2:40:00 PM Thanks Tim:-) Hugs jan x

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/21/2014 12:40:00 PM : )You nearly had me here : ) a good twist Jan : )parapapapa..Im loving it : ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 12:42:00 PM Thanks Charma:-) Hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/21/2014 12:19:00 PM You got me this time, sometimes I see them comming this one caught me off guard. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 12:20:00 PM You know me Maurice I'm a bit twisted lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/21/2014 12:14:00 PM Keeping me in suspense till the last,neatly done Jan; kudos...huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2014 12:16:00 PM Thanks Kayod5:-) I do like to have a twist at the end of the poem sometimes:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade Date: 11/21/2014 11:02:00 AM My bin is overflowing -- the dreaded running nose!! Login to Reply