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I DON'T NEED YOU ANYMORE

You were always close by when I needed you so I’m really sorry but I have to let you go You were always there to comfort me But I don’t need you in my life anymore I held you so gently in my hands You were always there to wipe away my tears Sorry I’ve got to drop you so suddenly You were always there for me in my hour of need Guess I’m going to have to put my tissue in the bin Jan Allison 21st November 2014

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Date: 11/23/2014 8:40:00 AM
Lovin' the little twist at the end x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/23/2014 8:42:00 AM
Thank Mr Jaybus - just read your Tired poem its EXCELLENT:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2014 6:24:00 AM
HA HA HA HA HA! Oh Jan....this is lovely. I honestly didn't know where this was going...and I was thinking..."This is so unJAN!" I knew you said it was humorous so I kept waiting for the punch line, but it got me by surprise. Lovely write. Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/22/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen I do like to write with a twist at the end of the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2014 3:43:00 AM
This is so sweet n witty Jan! Never cud think that the U was the tissue !
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/22/2014 4:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 8:48:00 PM
ahh, what a cute way to write, Jan. a tissue!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/22/2014 4:51:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 2:38:00 PM
Tis the season for tons of tissues, hope you get the ones that and soft and comforting. :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2014 2:42:00 PM
Yes I am always prepared Cas - never know when the tears will hit me when I think of dad but I am fine at the moment and he's doing really well:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 2:27:00 PM
I was wondering what it would be.....lol...hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 11/21/2014 12:40:00 PM
: )You nearly had me here : ) a good twist Jan : )parapapapa..Im loving it : )
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2014 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Charma:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/21/2014 12:19:00 PM
You got me this time, sometimes I see them comming this one caught me off guard.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2014 12:20:00 PM
You know me Maurice I'm a bit twisted lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 12:14:00 PM
Keeping me in suspense till the last,neatly done Jan; kudos...huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2014 12:16:00 PM
Thanks Kayod5:-) I do like to have a twist at the end of the poem sometimes:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2014 11:02:00 AM
My bin is overflowing -- the dreaded running nose!!
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