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I Don'T Need You Anymore

You were always close by when I needed you so I’m really sorry but I have to let you go You were always there to comfort me But I don’t need you in my life anymore I held you so gently in my hands You were always there to wipe away my tears Sorry I’ve got to drop you so suddenly You were always there for me in my hour of need Guess I’m going to have to put my tissue in the bin Jan Allison 21st November 2014

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Mr Jaybus

Date: 11/23/2014 8:40:00 AM

Lovin' the little twist at the end x

Jan Allison
Date: 11/23/2014 8:42:00 AM

Thank Mr Jaybus - just read your Tired poem its EXCELLENT:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/22/2014 6:24:00 AM

HA HA HA HA HA! Oh Jan....this is lovely. I honestly didn't know where this was going...and I was thinking..."This is so unJAN!" I knew you said it was humorous so I kept waiting for the punch line, but it got me by surprise. Lovely write. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2014 10:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Eileen I do like to write with a twist at the end of the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/22/2014 3:43:00 AM

This is so sweet n witty Jan! Never cud think that the U was the tissue !

Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2014 4:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2014 8:48:00 PM

ahh, what a cute way to write, Jan. a tissue!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2014 4:51:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/21/2014 2:38:00 PM

Tis the season for tons of tissues, hope you get the ones that and soft and comforting. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2014 2:42:00 PM

Yes I am always prepared Cas - never know when the tears will hit me when I think of dad but I am fine at the moment and he's doing really well:-) Hugs jan xx