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I Don'T Like Heights

Breathtaking views
the brochure said. 
But for me
it was nothing but
a sheer drop, gravity's 
worst nightmare lipped
on an edge and way below,
a brutal landing
of hard rock.

I don't like heights. 
Up here I have the lot,
a panoramic view offering
no distraction to what 
really waits for me
salivating beneath 
my jellied feet.

Just a step away,
nothingness wells its hypnotic 
horrors, a free fall into
the minds worse fate, flailing 
limbs frantically reaching
for something firm
to hold onto in thin air.  
Just think of it !
The last few seconds
of life bulleting downwards
towards oblivion.

No, I don't like heights.
I prefer to take my views
without a precipitous ledge,
closer to the ground,
then if I fall
it would be less likely
to be terminal and I'd 
have no time to think 
as I went down.

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Date: 4/11/2023 9:55:00 AM
Well written, Paul. Ive known a lot of folks afraid of heights. Never was a thing for me. Great to read you today my friend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/12/2023 12:14:00 AM
Appreciate stopping by...only like the giddy heights of poetry...the vertical stuff...na. Thanks mate.

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