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I Don'T Like Heights

Breathtaking views the brochure said. But for me it was nothing but a sheer drop, gravity's worst nightmare lipped on an edge and way below, a brutal landing of hard rock. I don't like heights. Up here I have the lot, a panoramic view offering no distraction to what really waits for me salivating beneath my jellied feet. Just a step away, nothingness wells its hypnotic horrors, a free fall into the minds worse fate, flailing limbs frantically reaching for something firm to hold onto in thin air. Just think of it ! The last few seconds of life bulleting downwards towards oblivion. No, I don't like heights. I prefer to take my views without a precipitous ledge, closer to the ground, then if I fall it would be less likely to be terminal and I'd have no time to think as I went down.

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Date: 4/11/2023 11:13:00 AM
Makes me think of how I sometimes elevate a problem and before I know it I'm tumbling into an abyss. Only later do I realise I need not have left safe ground. Also, I'd started with the fear of heights so decided to do a treetop trek with my daughter that was three hours long. I could leap off trees to get to the next platform rather than face the embarrassment of rescue. Plus I couldn't stay terrified for 3 hours. Did not cure - don't recommend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/12/2023 12:23:00 AM
Don't think I could withstand the challenge of desensitising therapy....too old for that. I'll keep my feet on the ground and take the occasional lift when the mood so moves me in a poem. Thanks Dilly for yr comments.
Date: 4/11/2023 9:55:00 AM
Well written, Paul. Ive known a lot of folks afraid of heights. Never was a thing for me. Great to read you today my friend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/12/2023 12:14:00 AM
Appreciate stopping by...only like the giddy heights of poetry...the vertical stuff...na. Thanks mate.

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