I Don'T Know Why Some Flowers Bother

I don't know why some flowers bother, 
To unfold their petals so late in the day,
At this time of year,
When there is such a nip in the air.


They might as well have stayed tucked up in their bed,
As come morning, I will only have to cut off,
What is left of their head,
With no chance of giving them even one peek,
In the hallway mirror,
To see themselves in full bloom,
Or to become the centrepiece on a well laid table,
For the guests to marvel at,
And comment on their rare beauty, 
As they gently fondle their delicate petals.

Oh, what a cruel fate awaits those flowers,
Who fail to show up at their appointed time,
Giving no thought to the weather,
Or for the one getting out of bed to cut off their head,
And replace them with ones from the corner shop, 
That will see themselves in the hall mirror,
And become a centrepiece at the table.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/19/2020 3:42:00 AM
The flowers must be afraid to face their fortune. They prefer to die before they even have the chance to be there on the table, or let the guests marvel at them.
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Date: 9/19/2020 2:22:00 PM
I guess life is about holding on and getting past these things so we can get to the good bits if we are still standing. Life is a privilege as it is such a fragile thing and yet a simple smile from a total stranger can re-energise us. Stay strong David in NZ
Date: 5/4/2020 8:17:00 AM
Quite an interesting write..I think about a long time..Without the caring of their mother plant, baby blooms opening into a new world to die..Wonderfully written poem David ..
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Date: 5/4/2020 5:41:00 PM
Your comments so insightful Jenish. I often think about where my ideas come from and my belief grows strong. I feel bid to write and I do not question. I accept the help. Are you still in lockdown at same place. Regards David in NZ
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