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I Dodged a Bullet

I DODGED A BULLET I dodged a bullet two weeks ago In that shopping mall A bullet, caramel skinned; moisturized That almost left a sister’s chest Spurting red spots everywhere I dodged this fine looking bullet That went three sixty degrees Around my waistline I sang praises, I almost rocked that Mic Check check I dodged a bullet… Yes! I dodged a fine one Six feet two inches; got me high Fine smelling cologne, I took a whiff Six packs front layered; I scrolled through, page after page In my fantasy Oh my! I dodged it sister; yes I dodged a bullet in hours It challenged my hormones They militated against my sense of reasoning I gave a silent scream for help My eyes coated in surprise My hands, still… My prize, a bullet? That bullet almost shot through me Between Africa and Jamaica It's warmth sent me down that sofa Attention! my twin babies saluted That voice, those eyes A combination of soul and jazz soothing the soul Soft and inviting, tempting; Sent shivers down my spine They slung a leash around me But I had to dodge that bullet On the last five days before New Year's Eve Neofloetry (c)2013.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 7:04:00 AM
check youtube for Neofloetry. you'll find me
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:59:00 AM
good morning, Edwina, would like to see one of your performance. Sounds inspiring. ..linda
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:48:00 AM
Thanks dear. Lol> I'm glad it didn't take me down.
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Date: 1/1/2014 5:08:00 PM
What is NEOFLOETRY by the way? sounds pretty cool..like it has it's own form :-) happy 2014
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Edwina Aleme
Date: 1/9/2014 5:53:00 AM
I used to love a girl group way back in high school called 'FLOETRY' of which Marsha Ambrosius was a member of; and also cos i love listening to neo-soul and hip hop music; it then gave birth to NEOFLOETRY (New Flow(hip hop) in Poetry) i love to perfom spoken word poetry style, so that's my performance name.
Date: 1/1/2014 5:07:00 PM
Edwina, I am glad you did not allow it to take you bring you down... The poem is very deep, and dramatic in some ways.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Edwina Aleme
Date: 1/9/2014 5:54:00 AM
Will definitely visit your page and check out the contest too. *hugs* Thanks for the warm welcome.

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