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I Died In Her Arm

My space suit leaked
Your arm took hold of me
Saving me from knowing all the universe
I did not float away to eternal darkness
In your arm, I took my last breath
Before returning to home below
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Macfarlane Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Great write for this picture, it's comical and sad at the same time : )
Vaso Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Thanks, :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 5:12 PM
like a romeo and juliet tragedy air borne!!!
Vaso Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:36 PM
LOL well now that you put it that way........ :)
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Must be scary - am keeping my feet firmly on the ground - will just keep my head in the clouds!:-) Hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Jan, by the way, what you see in the photo is "The Canadian Arm"
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