I Died In Her Arm

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My space suit leaked Your arm took hold of me Saving me from knowing all the universe I did not float away to eternal darkness In your arm, I took my last breath Before returning to home below

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2015 9:05:00 AM

Does this make you a space cowboy?

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2015 11:06:00 AM

Well this adds a new meaning to the CSI jargon, "hey detective, we found another floater"

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/5/2015 1:30:00 PM

Great write for this picture, it's comical and sad at the same time : )

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 5:12:00 PM

like a romeo and juliet tragedy air borne!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2015 10:36:00 PM

LOL well now that you put it that way........ :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/2/2015 1:14:00 AM

Must be scary - am keeping my feet firmly on the ground - will just keep my head in the clouds!:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/2/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thanks Jan, by the way, what you see in the photo is "The Canadian Arm"