I Died

I died, and with me all that I had known
My memories and dreams, now turned to dust
The world I loved, now empty and alone
A life once lived, now gone without a fuss

But in the quiet stillness of the night
I hear a voice that whispers in my ear
Your legacy will always shine so bright
For all the love and kindness that you share

And so, though I have left this mortal plane
My spirit lingers on, forevermore
In every heart that I have touched, I reign
A beacon of hope, and love, and more

So let not tears of sorrow cloud your eye
For I am with you, always, in the sky.


Date: 5/1/2023
Contest Name: I died
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Dear Ojingiri, the lyrical lightness and uplifting spirit of your sonnet touches me deeply. Your closing couplet enchants with its wonderful reassurance. Such a lovely piece! Congratulations for your wonderful placement on Craig's list. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hannah Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:24 PM
I'm so grateful for your kind words Susan. Thanks.
Fowler Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 7:02 AM
This is so sweet - I love the simplicity and the love shown in the message. Congratulations on your win! :)
Hannah Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Linda
Clarke Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Congratulations on your placement. A beautiful heartfelt sonnet ~
Hannah Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Thanks Clarke
Faulkner Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Glad to return with congratulations on your placement~
Hannah Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Thank you
Daniel Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Well done, Ojingiri, congratulations:)
Hannah Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Thank you so much Joanna
Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Very moving with the eternal power of love, nicely done~
Hannah Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Thank you so much Michelle
Hawley Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Best luck in this contest, you did amazing.
Hannah Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Thanks
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Very nice sonnet, Ojingiri on a very tough subject. Well done!
Hannah Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 7:31 AM
Thanks
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