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I Craved a Dream

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I craved a dream and you were there
My life a blur you did not care
Forgot your pain, in my defense
Your reasoning did not make sense
At the ceiling I lay and stare.

Yes, many times life isn’t fair 
For you, my love, showed much despair
You died from pains desired expense
I craved a dream

The fear you craved beyond repair
Nothing to your soul does compare
Now angel dust you do dispense
Love’s pain and sorrow does condense
Sister connection in the air
I craved a dream


Rondeau Rhyme Scheme: AABBA-AABC-AABBAC
Eight Syllables in each line except the 4th line in second stanza and the last line in the third stanza. They have four syllables and is the repeated refrain

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Date: 7/7/2016 1:08:00 AM
This is beautiful, Laura:)
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:19:00 PM
many thanks Jo :)-luloo