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I decide to take my dog to the park on this beautiful warm sunny day, and sit under one of the gazebo's picnic table-benches to enlighten some inspirational true creative writing. Sun beats down, bellowing clouds at a standstill. Breeze weaves through limbs making the leaves slightly wave. Grass sparkles in the dapple shades creating abstract scenes. I embrace a deep breath to clean fresh-air and watch my dog run. Usually there is someone walking or running on the walk path, but not today. Meadowlarks plunging into chatter conversation midst tree’s canopy. Rays of imagination sunshine young children yearning for play; in a hurry to finish eating their picnic lunch as their mothers sit relaxing comfort under the gazebo. Cheerful laughter star twinkles and glow on their faces as they run to the playground towards the jungle gym, to climb and explore the slides, and reaching meeting the sky on the swings. An infectious smile melting my heart just watching the children play rewards me with memories of my own rambunctious children when they were young. My imagination gives way to the creation of the moment movement, and feelings to description of my surroundings. 7/4/2024

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Date: 8/13/2024 7:20:00 AM
beautiful poem ~
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Date: 7/22/2024 11:43:00 AM
A lovely idea for the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/11/2024 11:01:00 PM
A wonderful day it is, dear Eve. I felt like I was there enjoying memories with you. I really enjoyed your sweet story, imagery, and verse. xhugs ~Anaya
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Date: 7/4/2024 7:10:00 PM
Eve, a perfect day is captured in this happy poem's beautiful narration. I enjoyed the gorgeous images, especially those in the second and sixth verses. Nicely written.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/4/2024 8:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and the wonderful compliment, Evelyn. Many blessings to you my friend

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