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I could not talk about it, so I wrote a poem

Hard work and success go together, As a human being, we are recognized with awards and honors, But there are many creatures in the world, Those who work very hard, never recognized, but achieve their goals. The ants, with their tiny bodies and mighty strength, Toil tirelessly, hoping they will never lose, They carry burdens, marching in a line, Their unwavering spirit, a divine inspiration. The bees, gather nectar, a task they willingly bear, Their hard work is not in vain, those who try never lose, They build their hive with precision and care, Their unity and diligence, a lesson we can share. And amidst the forest, the mighty beavers reside, Building dams and homes with unwavering pride. Their hard work and perseverance, a testament true, That with determination, there's nothing we can't do. Failure is a challenge, accept it, See what is missing and improve it, Unless you succeed, give up your peaceful sleep, Don’t run away from the battlefield of struggle, There is no glory without doing something, Those who try never lose.

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Date: 7/23/2024 11:11:00 AM
Yess how true... it's it the struggle to praise yourself your writing about here? That you deserve a pat on the back for your hard work and it's difficult to say so? I'd have to agree with that! But self esteem is a good trait and self love as well. We need to try to not judge others when they are full of self confidence but we usually do. Sadly. Xoxo
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Date: 7/22/2024 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/2/2024 9:49:00 PM
Hard work indeed pays off. Though one may not trumpet about it, his life will remain as an evident testimony to this fact. Well done my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2024 12:59:00 PM
- Agreed ... great writing, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely summer :) - hugs
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Date: 7/1/2024 11:06:00 AM
I enjoy this poem. Hard work pays off.
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Date: 7/1/2024 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great last line/so very true. "Good Luck" Have a great day writing away..............
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