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I could never stop loving you

our youth seemed easy even
with our broken smiles-
time withered into years later
and now forever continues on

we shared every emotion 
God created in the last 
twenty-three years; 
some left us breathless and
some left us weeping,
now the nights seem brighter
and morn comes too soon

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Serenity 
Happiness 
Adoration
Resentment
Exhilaration
Displeased

Elated
Madness
Over-joyed
Thankful
Inspiration
Optimistic
Negativity
Surprise

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skipping pebbles along the
shore as we tarry above
the grains where we first
met; the day my life changed 
forever…
and I didn’t even know it; 
youthful demons blinded me 
even when love was given
with ease-
insecurity molded into
confidence because of you,
my sweet love

fearing nothing and everything
at the same time,
needing nothing but the comfort
of strong arms embracing me
during winter’s depressed 
state

for you are mine and we are 
one, and together we shall 
explore all that is to come;
here and there and everywhere, 
no matter what journey we 
came from…
we shall always build the 
foundation in our home 
based on trust and loyalty 
              (our eternal sole purpose)

        so, tell me sweetheart-
how can I stop loving you? WHEN ALL YOU DO IS MOVE ME…




The last line is from my poem "you move me"
Date written: January 29, 2018

I chose the line "with broken smiles"

September 17, 2019
Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux 

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Date: 10/12/2019 9:11:00 AM
So p,easedto see your name on my winners list. A well deserved win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/9/2019 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Laura, this poem is a wonder you created from one short line of Rick's poem, I'm glad he felt the same way I do, and rewarded this with a win!
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Date: 10/9/2019 3:26:00 AM
Such a heartfelt poem luloo, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:10:00 AM
many thanks dear lady ;)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2019 6:07:00 PM
back to say congratulations my friend :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:09:00 AM
thanks again lovely Sandy :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2019 6:46:00 PM
I have no idea what the contest asked for, but you delivered totally and completely in a wonderful way - whatever it is they wanted, you surpassed expectations with this one.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
it was a fun contest, thank you sweet lady!;)-luloo
Date: 9/17/2019 8:52:00 PM
this is beautiful in every way my friend, the content, the form, the love within those lines...one can tell this one came from the heart and soul....gorgeous write! :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
awww thank you sweetest friend. be blessed!:)-luloo