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I Could Never Stop Loving You

our youth seemed easy even with our broken smiles- time withered into years later and now forever continues on we shared every emotion God created in the last twenty-three years; some left us breathless and some left us weeping, now the nights seem brighter and morn comes too soon ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ skipping pebbles along the shore as we tarry above the grains where we first met the day my life changed forever and I didn’t even know it youthful demons blinded me even when love was given with ease- insecurity molded into confidence because of you, my sweet love living a life of compassionate intimacy, based on trust and loyalty, are we- -our eternal sole purpose- fearing nothing and everything at the same time, needing nothing but the comfort of strong arms embracing me during winter’s depressed state for you are mine and we are one, and together we shall explore our adoration- here and there and everywhere, we shall build the most vibrant foundation so, tell me sweetheart- how can I stop loving you? WHEN ALL YOU DO IS MOVE ME… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dated: September 17, 2019

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Date: 1/5/2020 11:09:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your placement with your poem about love maturing and remaining.
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Date: 1/5/2020 6:41:00 PM
Luloo, I love this intimate and tender capture of a long-lived love and relationship! Favorite line is "fearing nothing and everything at the same time", oh how I relate to that. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:39:00 PM
Laura this was simply amazing! Should have placed higher! Congratulations on your placement!;)
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Date: 10/12/2019 9:11:00 AM
So p,easedto see your name on my winners list. A well deserved win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/9/2019 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Laura, this poem is a wonder you created from one short line of Rick's poem, I'm glad he felt the same way I do, and rewarded this with a win!
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Date: 10/9/2019 3:26:00 AM
Such a heartfelt poem luloo, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:10:00 AM
many thanks dear lady ;)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2019 6:07:00 PM
back to say congratulations my friend :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:09:00 AM
thanks again lovely Sandy :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2019 6:46:00 PM
I have no idea what the contest asked for, but you delivered totally and completely in a wonderful way - whatever it is they wanted, you surpassed expectations with this one.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
it was a fun contest, thank you sweet lady!;)-luloo
Date: 9/17/2019 8:52:00 PM
this is beautiful in every way my friend, the content, the form, the love within those lines...one can tell this one came from the heart and soul....gorgeous write! :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 8:08:00 AM
awww thank you sweetest friend. be blessed!:)-luloo

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