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And he said: “Truly I tell you, unless you change and become like little children, you will never enter the kingdom of heaven. Therefore, whoever takes the lowly position of this child is the greatest in the kingdom of heaven. " Matthew 18:1-5, The Bible
I come to the Lord as a child and he holds me in a lovely embrace, I feel his love and caress upon my hair, his touch on my cheek, he wipes away my tears. Though, I am grown now I am still his child. Since I was young God and his son Jesus has been my strength and anchors. Oh, whenever, I have known fear, or grief, or doubt, they are beside me holding my hand. When I was deathly sick they were there, and when I buried my loved ones, they held me close. I am never, ever, ever alone in this world, and I am not afraid of death because I know they will be waiting to greet me at that gold Heavenly gate and it will be my turn to give an embrace ... at heavens gold gate all my beloved and pets * souls like stars sparkling * * * ________________ June 12, 2022 Poetry/Haibun with Senryu/I Come To Him A Child Copyright Protected, ID 06-1464-270-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Like A Child sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 07/21/2022 Fifth Place

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Date: 7/27/2022 1:02:00 PM
Constance, belated congratulations on your win overflowing with childlike wonder of God's love. Going to God with that childlike wonder and awe is truly the best way! Lovely write of warm affection! Blessings!
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Date: 7/28/2022 3:28:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/21/2022 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! This is a perfect entry. A beautifully penned and enlightening Christian story. Love, ~Anaya
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:05:00 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/21/2022 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a heavenly write/story/picture. I love this one and your ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away........
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:05:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/21/2022 3:47:00 AM
A beautiful spiritual writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:06:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/21/2022 2:31:00 AM
So beautifully done - just alive with grace! God bless you and Congrats to you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:07:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate, blessings and love ~Constance

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