I Care I Search

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Written: September 24, 2023 _________________________________________________________ I care, I search, for the spark of divinity, That resides within every soul's vicinity. In the eyes of a child, so innocent and pure, I descry the answer, as simple and sure. In the embrace of a loved one gentle and warm, I find the solace that can weather any storm. In the laughter of friends, so joyful and bright, I decry the link that bestows everything right. I care, I search, for the meaning of life, For the purpose that transcends all strife. In the depths of my heart, a quest unveiled, To grasp mysteries that have long prevailed. Through mountains high and valleys low, I journey on, letting my curiosity grow.

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Daisy Meadows

Date: 11/15/2023 12:53:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/11/2023 7:34:00 PM

Back to say CONGRATS on a win Sotto!

Miranda Hawley

Date: 10/11/2023 6:59:00 PM

"I care, I search, for the meaning of life, For the purpose that transcends all strife." Fantastic lines for this poem! This is a great win in my contest so congrats!

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/26/2023 6:06:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful Sotto and every line resonates with beautiful uplifting energies! A big fav for me. Hugs ~ Anne :-)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/25/2023 7:26:00 PM

A very brilliant sonnet this is, such evocative lines flowing throughout with thought provoking depth & imageries. Life is indeed a journey and we sail on, exploring new mysterious, turbulent in highs and lows, searching for truths.. Your wordplay is truly captivating with such heartfelt emotions especially "I care, I search, for the meaning of life, For the purpose that transcends all strife" So much has been conveyed here.. An amazing poem as always~ keep writing and inspiring!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2023 4:55:00 AM

I care, I search, for the meaning of life, For the purpose that transcends all strife----Through mountains high and valleys low, I journey on, letting my curiosity grow---thoughtful, reflective, meaningful poem my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/24/2023 11:25:00 PM

So heartfelt and beautiful, shows mind of someone that cared for the best and sees beauty, i felt the way you’ve written this, and also those rhymes and flow of your poem is brilliant: i especially love “ in the eyes of a child so innocent and pure “ and “ search for the meaning of life” “ i journey on letting curiosity grow” yes we should always stay curious and keep searching and learning to grow. Brilliant write as always. You write so much in one day! Impressive and impeccable , goodluck