I Can'T Believe You'Re Mine

Undeniable passion under the eventide moon, we touch-
ivory laced nape, we lay and watch the constellations  
shine through the sky of indigo -  lost in innocent breath...
 -I can’t believe you’re mine.

To me you are the rays of hues beneath a rainbow-
Red…orange…yellow… green…blue…purple…they all shine 
as your eyes do, sweetheart. 
I see frost on the sill in the morning and I know your arms will 
awake to warm my chill.
-I can’t believe you’re mine.

Contentment does not speak our language.
For we are way passed that. We have fallen into heavenly bliss-
Your embrace preaches pure intuitions of each other’s romantic 
endeavors. 
I needed you at sixteen years old and I still need you at thirty-six- 
in deep love are we.
We make the perfect team, YOU and I…
-I can’t believe you’re mine.

As the days pass and the night's twilight embrace shadows 
within our deep connection, I will never forget our first kiss. 
Quickly tender with my anxiety heated-
                          …heart racing…faster and faster…
           ….into oblivion.
                           -I can’t believe you’re mine.


Written: September 27, 2016


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Us…a connection so strong beneath the brightest
constellations. Me, searching for the smallest hint
of love, and you searching for the biggest part of
your life. We were made to love each other as only
lovers are...
-I can’t believe you’re mine.

Sweet honeyed blossoms blooming in the mid-summer
heat, we dance and sweat together, as one. We lay
under the sheets in harmony and express our most
intimate desires. Romance is ours and so is this night...
-I can’t believe you’re mine. 

Far off distant lands know our love and they are willing 
to travel to know it. They read verses upon verses in our
journals dedicated to each other’s embrace and passion.
Before time was invented I loved you and before the
moon’s first rise, your heart called my name...
-I can’t believe you’re mine.

Can anyone else understand what we are? Are there
any more words to write for us? There have been days
of hunger and nights of pure bliss and all I can say is
thank you, my sweet. The light of your love showers
over my existence and I am forever grateful...
-I can’t believe you’re mine.


Written: October 18, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/18/2016 3:17:00 PM
Wow, then let me be the first. This is exquisite, a masterpiece of poetry. Your emotions, a deep feeling of love flows softly through the stanzas. Absolutely beautiful Luloo.
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