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I Can'T

I can’t go Life is sailing away I am stuck in the sand Worried Wondering if I missed my chance I keep calling your name Hoping Why am I with you? Scared I am falling for you I can’t go I can’t stay I can’t face this alone I can’t surrender Your face is in the sky I can’t look up Your breath is in the air It’s suffocating me I can’t let go of my ties with you There is no other world I can’t go Your existence is my prison I am lost within you The waters we swam in Oh so sweet But Now those waves are tiring I can’t go I can’t stay I can’t face this alone I can’t surrender

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Senanur...linda
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:59:00 AM
- Hello Senanur :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hi Senanur, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:51:00 PM
Senanur, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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