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I Can See For Miles

i can see for miles standing on mount everest- - big foot makes me jump

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:49:00 AM

JACK, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats Jack on HM for this powerful Haiku luv.. awesome visuals ..

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:38:00 AM

Dear Jack... Thank you for the H.M.. I really think this was one of my top Haiku's... Sorry about the title, you did not follow the title rule.... I still think this was a topper... thank you~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 11:23:00 AM

Oh no! Don't jump! Bigfoot has never attacked a human. Just extend a "long" arm in friendship. Cute poem, Jack! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/7/2011 10:07:00 PM

Wonderful Jack, marvelous Haiku. I really enjoy writing them as I hope you did too!! Great job!!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/7/2011 5:18:00 PM

Wow Jack-you are really good at these haikus!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/7/2011 3:55:00 PM

http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist print this out it's a big help!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/7/2011 3:54:00 PM

lol I can see some progress but haiku are seldom funny satire wit etc is more the tone of a senryu..what you do have right is YOU HAVE 2 PARTS!! yeah! gramatically & conceptually connected, you didn't capitalize or punctuate! yeah! you didn't title it! yeah!YOU indicated the cut correctly yeah!! work more on this you need a new 3rd line