I Came Upon a Shimmering Pond

I came upon a shimmering pond
And cast my line in deep
Set me down on the dock nearby
And dangled my aching feet

My mind goes back to earlier days
When in smaller ponds this boy did play
Where polliwogs were there to be caught
Before herbicides and pesticides wiped them all away

Now frogs no longer hop about for a determined boy to chase
Times when we strolled down quiet tree lined country lanes
Before streets with traffic lights came and took their place

A time when neighbors helped neighbors and folks had time to chat
Sunday dinner was a family affair with aunts, uncles and cousins there
A time when a gentleman met a lady he always tipped his hat

But that was then and times do change and I guess that’s alright
But one thing has not changed nary a bit
I still have not gotten a single bite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Ah!!! Thank you for the trip down memory lane, Donald. Loved your hilarious ending!
Bennett Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Elaine; It is always great to know that someone has taken their time to view any of my work and to then also comment on that work. I appreciate that.
Lindley Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Solid 7 on this great write.. I too, remember those bygone days. Days spent out in Nature, exploring its mysteries. I had pet toads, frogs , snakes spiders, crayfish, etc..
Deschler Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 1:25 AM
You have captured a nice moment of reflection and remembrance as you were sitting near that pond.... This brought back memories and made me long for the innocent days of my childhood.... A lovely write, Donald! I really enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem!
Duggan Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Nice poem Donald, so easy to read, loved it, take care my friend....................Vera.........
Bennett Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:22 PM
I really do appreciate everyone's comments but especially those from my loyal readers, the Duggans.
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