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I Came Out Sputtering

Forthy waves fooled me Lulled me into believing there would be warmth I plunged in. My heart nearly stopped. My body nearly frozen In the depths of this dark uninhabited lake What if I die? I wondered Who will find me? No one knew I was here. I could get a cramp. I came out sputtering. The woods were nearly silent. I saw a flicker of a leaf, and then another. My teeth were chattering. I put my head under a second time. It felt warmer now. Something slid past my buttocks. A snake? A turtle? Do they bite? A fish? It seemed warmer. I began slowly swimming. A little algae was on my fingers. I gently flicked it into the waters. Which seemed lighter now. The sun had arrived to watch. I swam into a natural spring. Not hot-tub warm, but warm. Delightful. It was as if I owned the lake And the woods. It was just me and God. I felt better than I had in years. Deciding at that second to swim every morning at this time while I was here. "No one swims at this time of year!" my friend called. Breaking my meditative ponderings. I waved. "I do!" I called. He waved and walked back to the house. Leaving me to my magical thoughts.

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Date: 5/7/2019 8:43:00 AM
Brrrrrrrr! You're a braver polar bear than I!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2019 10:54:00 AM
I am, and I can prove it.
Date: 5/5/2019 2:24:00 PM
When Robert comes, up all thumbs! Alert, alert! Here comes Kurt! P.S.: This verse is so refreshing, that I can't do without stupid jokes) As if I plunged in a cold water. It's brilliant, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/6/2019 5:02:00 PM
Brilliant? But of course. Ha! I love it that you think so. It is just my feelings on paper truthfully.
Date: 5/5/2019 1:20:00 PM
Great description of the swin and the thoughts that develop around it. The momentary shock of the cold water followed by the sense of exhilaration. So true to life.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/6/2019 5:03:00 PM
This was for a writing prompt "cold water". It came easily.
Date: 5/5/2019 7:48:00 AM
My friend, your poetry never sputters. Poetry are indeed magical thoughts and gifts given to ones readers!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/5/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Robert. What a wonderful thing to say! Wow!

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