I Came Out Sputtering

Forthy waves fooled me
Lulled me into believing there would be warmth
I plunged in.
My heart nearly stopped.
My body nearly frozen
In the depths of this dark uninhabited lake
What if I die? I wondered
Who will find me?
No one knew I was here.
I could get a cramp.
I came out sputtering.
The woods were nearly silent.
I saw a flicker of a leaf, and then another.
My teeth were chattering.
I put my head under a second time.
It felt warmer now.
Something slid past my buttocks.
A snake? 
A turtle?
Do they bite?
A fish?
It seemed warmer.
I began slowly swimming.
A little algae was on my fingers.
I gently flicked it into the waters.
Which seemed lighter now.
The sun had arrived to watch.
I swam into a natural spring.
Not hot-tub warm, but warm.
Delightful.
It was as if I owned the lake
And the woods.
It was just me and God.
I felt better than I had in years.
Deciding at that second to swim 
every morning at this time while I was here.
"No one swims at this time of year!" my friend called.
Breaking my meditative ponderings. 
I waved. "I do!" I called.
He waved and walked back to the house.
Leaving me to my magical thoughts.

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Date: 5/7/2019 8:43:00 AM
Brrrrrrrr! You're a braver polar bear than I!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/7/2019 10:54:00 AM
I am, and I can prove it.
Date: 5/5/2019 2:24:00 PM
When Robert comes, up all thumbs! Alert, alert! Here comes Kurt! P.S.: This verse is so refreshing, that I can't do without stupid jokes) As if I plunged in a cold water. It's brilliant, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/6/2019 5:02:00 PM
Brilliant? But of course. Ha! I love it that you think so. It is just my feelings on paper truthfully.
Date: 5/5/2019 1:20:00 PM
Great description of the swin and the thoughts that develop around it. The momentary shock of the cold water followed by the sense of exhilaration. So true to life.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/6/2019 5:03:00 PM
This was for a writing prompt "cold water". It came easily.
Date: 5/5/2019 7:48:00 AM
My friend, your poetry never sputters. Poetry are indeed magical thoughts and gifts given to ones readers!
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Date: 5/5/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Robert. What a wonderful thing to say! Wow!
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