Audrey Haick Poet Tanka

I Call the Shots Around Here

You must be kidding
Game's on and no one called me?
Ok, break time's up
I've been ignored long enough
I call the shots around here

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For Linda's "Baby Babbles" Contest

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James Fraser April 17, 2011 at 1:38 PM And so they do Annalise, sweet poetry at it's best. Have a wonderful week also. I'm on holiday, and gardening duty beckons....:)

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2011 at 11:41 AM hi, my anna.. your cinquain for catie has no title and can;t be read... go, go and check! huggs to ya! :) nette

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2011 at 10:57 AM Soup mail returned, dear. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire April 13, 2011 at 10:22 AM LOL It does seem like babies "call the shots" when they want attention. Your tanka made me laugh. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk April 12, 2011 at 4:15 PM a very creative piece like i have been doing with everyone else i wish you luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 12, 2011 at 7:52 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Annalise. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration and the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 12, 2011 at 3:48 AM cuteness, anna.. lind acan be tough inside, sodt outside!! love this!! winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet April 11, 2011 at 7:20 PM Nice humorous write Annalise,enjoyed--kashinath