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I Breathe You In

I breathe you in
           Deep within my soul,
I breathe you in
           Until I loose control,
I breathe you in
            You make me whole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:00 PM
beautiful!!
Smith  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Paige
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful ~
Smith  Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Thank you for spotting what I needed to change.
Miller Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 8:18 AM
I love this so much
Smith  Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Thank you
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